- Added missing page (1)
- Changed term "Subhuman" to "Demihuman" (1/3/17)

- Fixed clipping and hiding of text (3)
- Changed term "Hall" to "Hole" (1)

Thanks for your work, but what happened to the first page?
https://e-hentai.org/s/9e8fefb36c/1864018-34

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We need a "granny blowjob" tag.

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I think the term is demihuman, not subhuman. Lol.

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The subhuman wording always kinda feels weird, not saying it's wrong as I'm definitely not a jp speaker and unable to judge but personally would prefer demihuman, might be because of the negative connotation subhuman has in the western world.

e: thanks for the fast fix

Last edited on 27 March 2021, 10:36.

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@enterthepanda
Ikr? That may feel good to the pp but to me it's kind of a turn off to look down and see such a hot chick without teeth...

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Aquatic MonGirl is best mongirl

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jun+monster girl = rock hard

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Technically, the word used means both. But in this context demihuman would definitely be the right call.

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Lord above more Jun content is blesed.

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At least he got a souvenir from it. I heard that shark's teeth is a symbol of strength.

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"Subhuman" has a derogatory tone to it and is definitely a bad choice. Even the shop name has "demi shop" furigana in the missing first page so no reason to not use "demihuman" instead.

Last edited on 27 March 2021, 22:34.

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on p16, I imagine the "daughters of subhuman sharks" came about when trying to translate the word "musume", in which case it would not strictly mean daughter and instead would be better translated as "subhuman shark girls"

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Me: Man, this art is pretty good and this shark girl is pleasantly thicc.

*sees that's by Jun*

Me: Nice.

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Looks like I missed the first page when copying it over, also I saw suggestions on the some of the sentences and contexts; I'll be fixing that in a bit.

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"Aqua hall" but the sign is "Aqua hole" LOL

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I love Jun.
I love Shark girls.
I love Shark teeth.
Thank you very much.

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@H0R0 Thanks for the pickup, making sense of google translate/DeepL probably fried my irises so bad I missed that.

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It would be funny if she ended up pregnant and the next time he saw her she had to explain what happened.

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She's perfect, thanks for the translation!

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Gura still has a chance to grow LOL. :P

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@mokumundo: What do you mean with google translate? Is this a machinery translation?

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Maybe there should be a machine translation tag? A lot of those are popping up nowadays.

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shark. pog.

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Love me some Jun
pg 10 >"I'm just came" should be "I just came."

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what if he loses his match after all that lmao

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@Vile Mk 2
Used Google translate app to get the Japanese characters and used DeepL.com for better translation.
Sometimes looked for the meaning of Kanji to make sense of the sentences, then just tried to make the language more coherent to read.

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Always good to see more Jun works. doubly so for more of their monster girl stories.

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Hello MOKUMUNDO

I congratulate you for your work on the manga I come today to ask you to give me the clean pages of the manga to be able to make the translation in French the work of cleaning of the pages is enormous for my level and I do not wish to destroy the work by placing big white boxes to be able to write in where I would not have succeeded in reconstruction. I will understand if you refuse : )

You will of course be cited at the publication of the chapter for the enormous work you will have done biggrin.gif

Sorry for my bad English

Abs-Scan

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What I'd love to have in my life is a gentle, loving, big-tittied shark girl.

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10/10 would even live in Australia for one of these.

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