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(C84) [Jinapakusu (Yowashi)] Chousa Heidan Ura Tokubetsu Kunren | Survey Corps Backstage Special Training (Shingeki no Kyojin) [English] {SHTranslate}

(C84) [じなぱーくす (よわし)] 調査兵団裏特別訓練 (進撃の巨人) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-04-19 08:12
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Language:English  TR
File Size:152.3 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:888 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.24

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Posted on 19 April 2021, 10:24 by:   Floripes    PM
Score +45
https://www.doujinshi.org/book/614982/Chousa-Heidan-Ura-Tokubetsu-Kunren/
https://www.suruga-ya.jp/product/detail/ZHOA48451

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/692241/17712ffe13/
Posted on 19 April 2021, 11:11 by:   xyg9449    PM
Score -12
your english is awful and i hope you aren't charging as much as a real translation group
Posted on 19 April 2021, 11:12 by:   theprinceh    PM
Score +112
TATAKAW TATAKAW
Posted on 19 April 2021, 12:45 by:   ashelol42    PM
Score +17
I apologize @xyg9449 for the language quality. I just brought over a new translator who will help me from here on out, so we will work on to improve the quality of our language.
Posted on 19 April 2021, 15:50 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +94
I took a look at the pages, and the English used actually isn't that bad. There are a couple of errors here and there, but nothing a decent proofreader wouldn't catch.

For example:

P6: "Turned on", not "turn of".
P7: "Your abs aren't", not "isn't".
P16: "More gentle", not "more gentler".
P19: "Too quick", not "to quick".
P21: "For", not "fro".

If there's anything that needs a bit of work, it would be the punctuation -- particularly the lack of apostrophes for contractions and periods at the ends of sentences. You may also want to consider using a uniform font size throughout the pages as much as possible to make it look neater and a bit easier to read.
Posted on 19 April 2021, 16:23 by:   CelestialNTR    PM
Score +139
Better than the ending.
Posted on 19 April 2021, 23:29 by:   KaInEvIL    PM
Score -1
Even though the plot is my usual favorite, the drawing is really rough
Posted on 20 April 2021, 01:06 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +39
Honestly, If you've read the actual manga, this is pretty lighthearted in comparison. Pretty difficult trying squeezing NTR material out of Attack on Titan, though.
Posted on 20 April 2021, 01:55 by:   AaTheHero    PM
Score +46
Less fucking in this than there was in chapter 139
Posted on 28 May 2021, 07:38 by:   animefan71109    PM
Score +15
In the RAW, there's a few more untranslated pages.

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