The editing / cleaning looks really good. But I'd recommend using a different font (there's a thread for this in the forums) and maybe spending more time visually centering text within the bubbles.

The translation itself seems okay for the most part, but it could use a bit of editing to make the dialog flow better and to fix a few grammar/spelling mistakes.

Finally, just a preference thing, but there were two raws for this work uploaded. I prefer the other one as this one looks a bit overleveled to me (but I am biased).

Base +20, SCSS +19, thowok +6, Silver_Kirin +6, Thusa +1, lolwutnubcake +9, DasMadScientist +6

this needs a sequel man, a post credits scene, anything, i doubt his social anxiety was cured through a dick, at least he won't be with the futa but what about the rest of the seminar? I NEED ANSWERS NYUUHIN

Base +6, Crabacious +6, thowok +6, menschmaschine +6, fag1234 +6, zangetsu96 -7, onigirichan +6, lolwutnubcake +9, DasMadScientist +6, Blaze Viper +6, limehat7 +6, Nausea +7

futanari dick bullies her way to the top. i don't like it.

Base +6, Brego1 -6, XZsya -8, Laufeia +6, NitroX72 -6, Shota_Cried_WolfGirl -6, d_reaper -8, slumps -6, Addictorator -11, NewhalfIsMale +10, Infinialt +6, Mr.Baum -6, severalGB -6, and 5 more...