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Nice thank you the rewrite not bad but I prefer proper translation.

@dragontamer8740 i talking about this https://e-hentai.org/g/1733501/d1ba6b907a/, this one is proper translation but the rewrite also quite good for a while.

Last edited on 05 May 2021, 03:33.

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@kaizer_emperor: Please elaborate. I'd vote for the "rewrite" tag only if this actually is one.

In any event, any day I see a new Gekka Kaguya thing is a good day

Edit:
@pekcun
Ohhh, yeah, I think I remember that one now!
So it was a different gallery that predated this one which was a rewrite. Thanks for clarifying.

Love Gekka Kaguya stuff. It's always great.

Last edited on 05 May 2021, 19:47.

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@dragontamer8740
He's not talking about this one as the rewrite, he was talking about the previous "translation" of this work being a rewrite.
"the rewrite was not bad" was talking about the other gallery, "proper translation" is this one.

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Fucking thank you for giving us a translation without stupid NTR shit

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Never thought I'll read futanari story one handed

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thanks, really loving gekka kaguya's futa doujins

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How do you not make friends because you have a dick? Do you tell everyone you have one?

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It's not incest if they aren't related.

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@S-One
Was it even really NTR if the husband is dead?

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> First time getting a blowjob

Shingo was a shit husband. How could you say you love and accept her when you won't even suck her dick?

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Not gonna lie, I've always loved the mad shit talking they do about the husband in the rewrite. But this is very nice, too! Thank you for commissioning! <3

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Final page should probably read

>Sorry, brother
>I'm still sad that you're gone, so,
>let me borrow your WIFE,
>for just a little longer...

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Finally, the censorship in the rewrite was pretty unbearable. Only complaint I'd have is that this shouldn't be tagged as female:yuri, female:futanari is its own thing and both should only be tagged if both are actually present. Look at the tag definition if you're unsure.

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@S-One @leftrightup ...I mean, she remorselessly made love to her brother's widow on the very same day of his funeral... He wasn't even in the ground yet. If this isn't NTR (I think it is), then it's about as close as you can get to it while still keeping the NTR label off lol. If that makes NTR adjacent situations more enjoyable for people who say they dislike NTR, I guess good for them?

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Imagine having a futa wife with a huge dick and not sucking. frotting or getting pegged by it.
At least the sister in law will make good use of from now on

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Still hoping for a a translation of this artists Granblue Fantasy doujin. Their futa on female stuff is top notch

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Soooo much better! The rewrite was going to need to call 911 with that overdose of edge it tried to give the reader.

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Oh cool, no whack ass story about having the husband's penis grafted on as a momento (I mean, I know hentai logic is a thing, but still, wut?), and, while I can't believe I'm saying this, the censorship is nowhere near as obnoxious.

This is going in the collection.

Edit: Okay, considering some of the dialogue is censored for some reason, the overall censorship is NOT less obnoxious. Apologies.

Last edited on 18 May 2021, 03:39.

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This makes me wonder... why don't we have a "dickgirl on female" tag?

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@definitionofinsanity

We have Futa_on_female but it varies with the search. Really wish we had that clear and cut for all the futa pounding pussy fans

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Well, in their own way they're following the Japanese tradition of wearing white to mourn the dead...

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I genuinely have to wonder how someone went from this to that one re-write...

Trully, human imagination is a fearsome thing.

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