Greetings! I'm back again with another comic, this time around, it's a story by Jnightshade. If that name sounds familiar, that's because you've read HC by Shinra ;). This is an origin story for the demonic seer in his story "The Company"
You can check it out here: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Company.12817 You can also visit Jnightshade at: buymeacoffee.com/Jnightshade
There are lesser pages as compared to my older comics as I'm trying out a new format. Do let me know if this is better. Thanks for reading & I hope the comic was enjoyable.
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Great work - continues to be the quality as expected - but personally I prefer more the older style where the transformations/changes were a little more drawn out - maybe not 20 pages long but this comic characters change across 1-2 panels - just my thoughts but keep up the content
Agree with above, the best aspect of corruption is the slow descent into evil, the struggle between light and darkness, only for the dark to become more and more appealing to our girl, over some time, as she's fighting against more and more pleasure. I very much dislike the Cantraps approach of "whoops, i ate something weird and now i'm evil". The appeal of corruption is the PROCESS, not the result.
So for me, the vote goes to longer stuff, with more time for investment. You had a pretty good balance with Cursed artifacts, I'd argue some scenes deserved to be even longer. Anyway, the quality is still amazing, and whatever you go with will be appreciated. Just my 2 cents. Cheers
Yeah, I managed to enjoy this one -- but -- the writing was pretty bad (things just seem to happen for no apparent reason). The grammar errors didn't help either. I gotta also rant on the Seer's face...She looks like she had a face surgery that went badly. But, yeah, I managed to enjoy this one. Probably won't return to it, though.
@Qtronic I can't possibly agree more. & just to clarity it to any creative out there, I'd say that what really defines corruption for me, is specifically when the characters make you think: "why would anyone choose that?" -- That sense of despair, paired with relent to immediate pleasure. What you wrote explains perfectly why that is, the pleasure etc, I just find it easier to convey to authors how to specifically push that button.