𝐔𝐏𝐃𝐀𝐓𝐄 - 𝐑𝐞𝐦𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐝 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐮𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐜𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐚𝐫𝐲 𝐒𝐀𝐌𝐏𝐋𝐄𝐒, 𝟕𝟐 𝐩𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐬 -> 𝟏𝟎 𝐩𝐚𝐠𝐞𝐬

for A Weirder and Geeky Version - https://e-hentai.org/g/1917533/869ad0cbcb/

or

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/90340418
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This is a Commercial Commission I Draw with the Client from Pixiv/Discord/Patreon user; Monsieur Link022; this project also supported by some Patreon/Discord user, it's Mr RTR Discord and Unfix-씨 to provide some financial support when Link022 was unavailable to continue the project due to some Trouble back then at his hometown in France a few months ago.

This Commission is just a Sample and a VERY LONG one; if you interested in an Anime/Manga Girl with Big Ol' Tiddy being eaten alive by Prehistoric Animal, then you can buy this Manga on Gumroad here:

https://gumroad.com/a/603657331

for Related storyline [Villain Introduction]:

https://e-hentai.org/g/1652006/e3c975dd61/
or
https://gumroad.com/l/fsremake

This Commission is also made 1 Page/Month to sustain the Client's financial's daily life. So I hope you respect the Client and not redistribute it or reupload the Full Chapter anywhere, including this site.

Thanks, again, it's Guro hard Vore genre. Therefore, it will be disturbing for most people, so I will say have a nice day for you all.👍
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SYNOPSIS - A Dust of Universe

Sometimes or even often, "The wise creatures" or Homo Sapiens change when they are not ready to change. It happened by surprise, brutally beaten up literally or metaphorically so they can evolve compellingly. But what is the power of a living being that has no significant meaning in this Mortal World? In the end, Sapiens are just a fragment of Dust.

In an Exoplanet - C300M, the inhabitants claimed themself as "Human" and claimed it as Planet "Earth" as well; How classic.

A low-ranked Female Human mercenary - Sophie Armatevo, encounters a prehistoric Animal while on an Exploration Mission on the Dinosaur Island - Isla Croquer.

She could not refuse the mission due to her bounded debt of gratitude; she was raised and treated when she was an orphaned baby by the Science and Military Organization: [IN-CEST] or [International Ancestral Corporation].

Inexperienced as she is, she now has to face a Terror and horror which she cannot comprehend, not even for an average Human.

This is Her inevitable Fate from what was written in the "Book" of Lifespan for Organic beings.

Soon, [we] can harvest her soul to bind in our contract, and then..

A new Champion will be born.
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3 Other Synopsis Japanese, French, and Indonesia available on Gumroad

There are many ways to advertise your "work"... But this is taking it a bit too far. Not the first time you've been doing it either.

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appreciate your enthusiasm, but to be frank, this looks like a hot mess.. 72 pages, yet so little value..

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@Luna_Flina
@bunnygunny

Yes, I'm fully aware of this mess. I even hesitate to post it, and even before this, I try to minimize the page to only 10 pages max.

But I know that this gallery will be distributed to "other minor sites (meme code site, any non-sad panda sites)", and I can't put a description like on this site.

Therefore, full of shame, I uploaded these long-ass pages, so I don't have to visit each distributed site.

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(if it's essential and/or breaking the rule in here) I will lessen this sample gallery after it got distributed, if that's what you mean.

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thank you, I have lessen the pages

Last edited on 06 June 2021, 09:10.

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@Lamik-D: i don't think there is any rule about posting a long ass sample, but it will tank your rating - which is not great for a promo (unless you are in the "There is no such thing as bad publicity" camp, then a 1-star gallery will serve you well enough)

Also, "interesting" choice for your sample.. while reducing your gallery to 10 is a good direction, it just halfway there.. of these 10 pages, we have 1 cover and 1 full page, 1 credit page, 1 set up story page (so far still okay), and then.. what? why do you have to butcher your own art like that? I understand that you want to showcase different languages, but please - just split them into different pages.. and then the meme - please don't overuse (or explain your meme).. It looks like those April fools galleries, which tend to have low scores because we ehentai users are humorless bunch..

Overall, it looks like an incredibly low effort, money-grab gallery that well deserved its low rating (like, it doesn't even have any guro contents in it (yet), yet it already got rating-bombed like an actual hardcore guro gallery), and the fact that there are only 10 pages left just make it all bare to see.. I'm not a fan of guro, but your art is okay; and your related gallery has almost 4 stars, despite being an actual guro one.. this gallery has potential, but it's all wasted..

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@Bunnyguy

Thank you very much; it is helpful, so I will keep it in mind when posting other works next time; if it's a promo post, it is preferable to make it Not complicated or too long without a real point; I got it.

All alright, so it's better to separate the pages for showcasing the variants, not mix it.
ah yeah, I should have realized that the community here don't really like this type of joke (Direct Joke by putting the Meme image inside Post); I will remove the meme reference next time as well,

thank you for telling me all of this; I really appreciate it that you took your time as well for a direct critic; it's better to get pointed out for the mistake that was made rather than being ignored and then stay clueless, so im' really glad, i hope you have a good life and blessed, man🙏

about ratings, i never really care about that, it's gray to know if the bad rating is for the Gore content, or something Technical(like right now), still low ratings - as Gore content are meaningless to me, it's not affect my life

what i want to know is something like what you did, comment and/or critic so i can learn from it.

Base +7

That was bad and you should feel bad. You did a bad job...

Base +4

@WhyIsALoginNeeded

Thank you👍

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@Lamik-D: Glad to see you take these criticisms in stride.. In my opinion, you may:

1. add more "meat" to your sample. This is simply too barebone - as I said before, out of 10 page, you only have 3 page of actual content (pg 1, 3 and 4), 1 of these is acceptable (4); 1 is a cover (so it doesn't really count); and 1 is just badly butcher (5).. None of them is actual hentai.. (6), (8) and (9) are just gag, and (7) is basically useless as a sample - it provides nothing. Only (10) belong to this website, but it's just an incomplete crop.
Aim for at least 5 full pages of actual hentai, then a few story pages if you wish.. Only 1 "call-to-action" page at the end - one is enough, while two or more (out of 10 page) are just bad

2. if you want to include different languages, make it an English section, a Japanese section, a French section.. not 4 language-variant of a page, then another 4 language-variant of the next page, and so on.. It may look like common sense for ehentai users, but given the fact that you included them all in a single page, I feel its important to note it here..

3. using meme is okay, but don't overuse it - unless you want to make it a gag comic (which is much harder to pull off than people may think).. a reference here and there is acceptable, but putting the original meme on a page is tacky, and quite frankly - if you have to explain your joke for other to laugh, then maybe you should not tell that joke in the first place..
Also, these cats look really bad for some reason..

4. rating is usually meaningless, but this is your promo.. when people see a 1 star gallery, how many do you think will expect it to be a quality one worth 20$? And how many will click just to see how bad this shit show is? If you are on this website long enough, you will know what to expect from a 1 star gallery - either it is shit, or it is a scam..

Rating-wise, this gallery is unsavable. It may be best for you to create a new one with better sample, and then kill this one with fire..

PS: it kinda weird to hear that guro means nothing to you, given your Pixiv is full of these stuff..

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@bunnygunny

haha, of course, I will listen to valuable advice so I can improve myself, human born with imperfection exist to Completing each other, as result we have Technology Development and Civilization, if humans are perfect we all live in stagnant stage, so I really appreciate praise, insult and critics, it's fascinating

1. got it, I will try another format in the next post. it will be a more multi-purpose gallery using your advice,

2. ah, I actually pretty recent in uploading works, I didn't know about e-hentai forums before, Before becoming an artist or register to the forum, I just here to read, I only upload my own work, so i don't know much about the rule, so thank you, next time I will post in a different language.

3. there is a real reason for putting the Cat, it is using Meme as a gag so people can recognize it, but as you said, it's a mess and I should have NOT put the actual cat meme together. so Thank you very much
it has reason regarding the story for the cat existence, not just random meme, if I have to explain it's her Deceased Cats that killed and become a "Wandered Soul" stayed together with their Owner and can't go back to the afterlife yet.

do you mean like Bad in Expression or Bad in Drawing?
- if you mean Expression, obviously for the cat feel the pain for their master's private area being eaten.
- if you mean by Drawing, then well I'm not a Professional Artist, so I still learning to Draw, I guess about 2 years now since I learn to study drawing? i hope my drawing will be improved so i can draw better

4. Well it can work for 2 purposes actually, but I understand, which is back to point 1, and what you mention as unsavable, therefore, i should make a better post next time. but i know it will get low rating anyway even if it's done correctly due to the content is not for everyone or a shit show
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ah seems like a misunderstanding, i mean in e-hentai, Low Rating, Lowest Rating in Post, not only Guro, any Post in general means nothing to me, people has different preference and taste, i saw highest rating gallery and it does not amuse me at all, and i saw a low rating post it's actually piqued my interest, so just be yourself to like what you really like, just like Anime, Game, Movie and TV series preferences🙏

also for me, it is all just a Drawing, it's not real, so i don't need to feel stressed or angry over a fictional character that will never alive and never dead that only exist within Pixels programmable language code and Composites of Liquid pigment and resins. Life is too precious to waste on Virtual negative emotions

all in all, thank you man, be happy and stay healthy, I'll be more careful for my post.👍

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I actually got the .pdf for this comic. It's really good although some of the story-bits result in a good chunk of redundant pages in the middle. Definitely has nice focus on tit and cunt abuse.

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@Sekk

Thank you very much for buying. I really appreciate it and glad if the Doujin is actually good.🙏

about that certain "redundant pages", it was inspired from Endless Eight Suzumiya Haruhi anime, and what I mean by inspiration is that Endless EIght actually a controversial episode where they were doing the same thing over and over again and the Animators of KyoAni actually doing it for 8 straight episodes, it's "pointless" for some people, but for me and some others, it's part of the importance of the Lore that leading the Plot and the Frustration, Boredom and Stress for Nagato Yuki(Purple-haired Glasses Alien) having through that cycles over and over again since this is not anime, so the style that I can do is by doing "that" but on different manners that still stay on the base system of story

This Doujin Commission Part 1 and 2 will adapt the Awakening of Sophie Armatevo just like Persona Protagonist's Game, but through Humiliation from Eaten alive, degradation, and the Path of Wrath. because right now, I'm preparing my study to develop a Game and make a complete Story in Game Format for Cretaceous Princess, and "that redundant page" element will be included as part of the lore as well

I plan to connect the story to the Gorgeous Meat/Female Slaughterhouse for the interference of the Extraterrestrial entities later.

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@Lamik-D

Hey there, I just caved in and bought this comic and I gotta say, I love the art style and content! However as @Sekk said, the middle part did feel like a cop out to increase the number of pages of this comic. That being said tho, I'm actually looking for the next chapter when it is finished and released! Keep up the good work! :)

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