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[Rocket Monkey] Ohanabatake no Naka de Kouhen | At The Flower Field Part 3 (Netorare Serenade) [English]

[ロケットモンキー] お花畑の中で 後編 (寝取られセレナーデ) [英訳]

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Posted:2021-07-01 05:37
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Language:English  TR
File Size:149.5 MiB
Length:30 pages
Favorited:1209 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.52

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Posted on 01 July 2021, 05:37 by:   bagiaaa    PM
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Raw source: https://e-hentai.org/g/1523185/d89efc9012/

TL: Samid from ChoriScans (choriscans@gmail.com)
Editing: bagiaaa

At last, the final part is here.

Seeing something out of place? Missing pages? Critic? Feedbacks? Don't hesitate to put those in the comment section.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 06:02 by:   Letmeinjoe09    PM
Score +63
The raw made it seem way more mean tbh

Because reading it in English is pretty funny lmaooo

Thanks for the translation
Posted on 01 July 2021, 06:33 by:   Kira10    PM
Score +33
welp (´・ω・`)
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:01 by:   Imuyaoi    PM
Score +158
oof man, i wouldnt be surprised if they got murdered in cold blood after what they just did.... poor guy.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:11 by:   AngraMainyuu    PM
Score +146
wish this site had a netori tag. anyway do people really not get over unrequited love after that many years?
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:16 by:   ayami123    PM
Score +146
seriously typical NTR plot, rape the girl then mind break her LOL

there's no build up to take this seriously
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:16 by:   8050    PM
Score +36
Yep, last panel is when you fully realize you've done fucked up...
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:27 by:   quinngarcia    PM
Score +69
I sense a double murder in the papers
Posted on 01 July 2021, 07:59 by:   Chen Nyan~    PM
Score +62
Damn I was hoping for a third part where Naoyuki just murders the both of them.

(╬▔皿▔)╯
Posted on 01 July 2021, 08:06 by:   Yukipo~    PM
Score +44
It really felt like a proper netori until this chapter but yeah man that last page really sets up for a 4th part with the cuck about to go in a murder rampage.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 08:17 by:   reignengine    PM
Score +75
There was no need to humiliate the guy, the first two were good as it showed how the mc felt and then he kinda went douchebag.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 08:30 by:   Notalent    PM
Score -56
Inc reee-ing about ntr, when this is really about a dumbass who ignored his girlfriend without explaining what he was doing when all she really wanted was her boyfriend to spend some time with her, and a guy who loved her and was willing to actually put in the time.

The guy who got NTR'd deserved it, the guy who got the girl deserved her.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 09:38 by:   Imuyaoi    PM
Score +232
This is the same shit as "I felt neglected so I cheated, It's all his fault and deserved to get cheated on". Like bruh really? you didnt even have the "talk" for it and just went on a sexcapade.

The guy who got NTR'd didnt deserve it, friend was an asshole who couldnt move on and force himself on her when she saw through his lies, and the girl...she a loose woman.

mfw Tomoki being a sore loser he had to mindbreak rape her just to get accepted lol
Posted on 01 July 2021, 10:08 by:   exedes    PM
Score +25
I hope in a part 4 with the mc revenge
Posted on 01 July 2021, 10:17 by:   mister wolf    PM
Score +111
He is better off without them in his life and at least he didn't marry her so its a clean break. Could have easily ended with him raising and paying for another man's children with an unfaithful wife without knowing, which is the worst thing that can happen to a man. You should see the statistics on paternity fraud. Block and delete both of their numbers, grieve over what happened, go out start dating again.
Last edited on 01 July 2021, 11:00.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 13:40 by:   torenz    PM
Score +13
I see Rocket Monkey, I favorite.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 14:42 by:   vjbeal96    PM
Score +57
So literally after the deed is done, What do they do next? How do you even grab her stuff without having to confront that situation. Like this would never work.

Edit: I also need to add that he is quite selfish in the story overall. The main things he says are I can make her happy. She'll choose ME. Literally the epitome of selfish.
Last edited on 01 July 2021, 15:01.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 14:51 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +45
"your cock can't satisfy me anymore"
Bitch, did I miss a chapter where she has sex with the bf?

Whatever, worst friend ever and the girl he was proposing was a turbo slut.
I say it hurt but he dodged two bullets at once. Hopefully Nao moves on.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 15:12 by:   DeliriousEagle    PM
Score +25
Hope the guy has an ace up his sleeve as a fuck you to both before moving on.
Posted on 01 July 2021, 18:12 by:   beyblader    PM
Score +143
Honestly the thing that bothers me in this story is the sudden 180 flip in their personalities. Like the chapters leading up to this make them all feel much more like actual people than most NTR stories, and she even shows genuine remorse when she finds out MC has been lying to her. However suddenly MC goes full rape mode and half way through the sex scene she just goes "you can't satisfy me anymore" and completely flips to being callous, almost rubbing it in her boyfriend's face when she knows he's still watching. It's so weird to start with her being so remorseful and empathetic only to suddenly be so cruel. I know it's porn, but NTR is an inherently story-focused fetish, so why have her act so out of character like that after spending so much time establishing her as a somewhat reasonable person?
Posted on 01 July 2021, 18:43 by:   Sylphon    PM
Score +88
I just can't get hard for NTR stories, end up just reading the plot instead and hating most characters involved, sometimes skipping the sex entirely. Thinking over it, this could have been a pretty good story if they just didn't include the mindbreak aspect. Best friend decides to rape her and show the boyfriend, effectively fire bombing all of their relationships together. She can no longer go back to the boyfriend, she ends up hating the best friend for lying to her, video taping her, and using her like that. Best friend doesn't get the thing he wanted because it turns out that rape doesn't "just work", and the boyfriend despairs over having lost everything still. Would have been a strangely interesting story where they all basically lose and are all worse for having done it, which would have been more interesting overall, without the mindbreak aspect. Without the mindbreak the story is best captured in the moment where he tells her "its too late for either of us to go back" and just decides to rape her, he doesn't care about appearances anymore, he's decided to be as shitty as possible. NTR stories would be more interesting if the rapist wasn't just a magical entity where everything works out for them and their dick is magic and can instantly mindbreak a girl, otherwise it feels like its written exclusively for the sake of the boyfriend to fuck him over, and the girl ends up feeling more like a prop for his despair in the process, who can't think for herself. Would be more interesting if writers didn't write the plot as stilted, and sometimes no one really wins, instead sometimes the moral is just "shit happens" instead of the moral being "The universe has conspired together to say, Fuck this one guy in particular".
Posted on 02 July 2021, 03:11 by:   moximoore    PM
Score +62
This is an unexpected plot from Rocket Monkey. The switch-flip in this chapter just feels... Off? In the first chapter it was drunken cheating, to willful cheating, this one was straight up rape. If it had started with rape it'd be different.

I think this would have worked better if he tried to force her, but she got away, then told MC the truth about what she's been doing. Then MC screams at her to get away from him, she returns to NTR guy, depressingly accepts his advances. But in the middle, MC calls and says he forgives her and wants to build a life together, she tries to leave NTR guy again, but NOW her switch is being flipped then the story continues from page 11.
Last edited on 02 July 2021, 07:03.
Posted on 10 July 2021, 12:46 by:   D3DIZ    PM
Score +11
Posted on 22 September 2022, 00:00 by:   yu_10_10    PM
Score +24
Boyfriend lucked out and both these trashy people will be horrible in the long run. In the first chapter the guy says he and his girlfriend just broke up. I suspect she realized what an asshole he was. Early divorce. Poor kids.

I think NTR works better when everyone doesn't come across as evil or incredibly stupid.

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