the original Japanese can be found here

https://e-hentai.org/g/734508/cc4d41c10d/

this was something I translated as a part of a trade with someone

kindly typeset by my friend Midari. He accepts typesetting commissions, and if anyone is interested, they can message him at @midari_dayoo on twitter
if you are interested in having something translated, feel free to send me a message on the forums.

I am aware that pages 4 and 22 are about half the resolution of the others. I had forgotten that ***** doesn't display full size images past a certain size and so I accidentally sent the wrong resolution to the person who redrew the text out of the pages.

any comments or critique on the translation or typesetting would be appreciated

edit: filled in several empty bubbles and changed some typeset bubbles

edit 2: the previous one didn't meet the requester's expectations. Typos were fixed, title was translated, other SFX were translated

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/734508/cc4d41c10d/

CHN: https://e-hentai.org/g/1326097/9ae9204212/

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Great stuff! Specially the Neo Ranga part.

Base +43, Digifoto +6

one of the best artists, glad it got a translation finally

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