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[Manidaruma] Akuma ga Machi ni Yatte kiteru | A Demon Comes To Town [English]

[まにだるま] 悪魔が町にやって来てる [英訳]

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Posted:2021-07-11 10:22
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Language:English  
File Size:72.57 MiB
Length:20 pages
Favorited:552 times
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Average: 4.12
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Posted on 11 July 2021, 10:22 by:   Mr_Person    PM
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this is my first attempt to do something somewhat competently with like cleaning, redrawing, and not just ignoring the SFX and being relieved when i didnt have to translate a page with only sex sounds on it
although its a pain in the ass to do ill probs do more if people prefer this kinda stuff so yeah
Posted on 11 July 2021, 10:54 by:   dharani    PM
Score +20
Posted on 11 July 2021, 12:05 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +44
Some minor corrections you may want to use, in case you plan to update this gallery:

P01
"The desires of greedy humans", not "a greedy humans".

P02
"Girls", not "girl's".
"Didn't", not "didnt".

P12
"My belly's already too full", not "bellies".

P16
"How are we supposed to do it with your small frame" or "to make do with your small frame", not "How are we supposed to do with your small frame".

P17
"Definitely", not "definetly".
Posted on 11 July 2021, 13:21 by:   Mr_Person    PM
Score +12
@mewo_pao
easy thanks for the help mate
i gotta use my eyes more aye
updated the gallery

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