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(Futaket 15) [Piepillow (Appyalpie)] Futa Ochiru shi! [English] [Jormungandr]

(ふたけっと15) [ピエピロー (あぴゃるぴえ)] ふた堕ちるし! [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-07-20 02:49
Parent:1961163
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:91.64 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:1073 times
Rating:
264
Average: 4.30

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Posted on 20 July 2021, 02:49 by:   Jormangander    PM
Uploader Comment
Hey guys, I tried my best to translate this piece, hope you enjoy.
Posted on 17 July 2021, 07:43 by:   Sharav    PM
Score +27
Posted on 17 July 2021, 08:24 by:   Sylphon    PM
Score +479
Kinda sucked because the premise stopped mattering and dives into unrealistic fantasy in like two seconds. Story of a delinquent girl and a cold transfer student who might find out her secret and mess with her... Then two seconds later the transfer student is an all powerful evil genie who can sell you into slavery in the modern era without any explanation, and controls the government or something, and had an officially sanctioned rape room, and blah blah blah. Would have been better if she found out her secret and used it to extort her in school while keeping the original setting with a slow burn corruption plotline, rather than her being an unrealistic all powerful girl with mind drugs, slave contracts, and rape rooms.
Posted on 17 July 2021, 08:25 by:   ForteGK    PM
Score +34
Was hopeful for some orgasm denial there, like the cover. Oh well.
Posted on 17 July 2021, 16:59 by:   AkatsukiAogawa    PM
Score +14
nonsensical story aside, this shit hot af
Posted on 18 July 2021, 16:44 by:   Xetix999    PM
Score +15
it's actually reverse.. where futanari fuck everyone and everything she sees, while all victims becomes her slaves ...
Posted on 20 July 2021, 03:07 by:   Pope_arazzi    PM
Score +9
Great artwork, like the loose style. Thanks.
Posted on 20 July 2021, 05:13 by:   PonyPonyPonyPony    PM
Score +47
It makes more sense in the context of the author's previous stories.
Posted on 20 July 2021, 08:58 by:   MexicanMau    PM
Score +61
it bothers me that the art style is really good, but the context of the story sucks
Posted on 22 July 2021, 02:41 by:   Enbu    PM
Score +45
Yeah, the transition from page 9-10 is such a mood killer that I can't be arsed to to use this one. Like the art, but the big switch and a lack of dynamics was a massive turn off. It'd have been a lot more fun if the subtle masochist tendencies the delinquent had was exploited via the transfer student and slowly ramped up via porn antics, but nahh... effort.

Since he seems to write the same sort of story given the other one I read, I'm giving this guy a pass.
Posted on 22 July 2021, 21:08 by:   fuckmewitharake    PM
Score -94
Stop shitting on the story just because you dont like you tranny faggots seriously no

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