Hi, this is basically my first colouring, I'd actually really appreciate any criticism at all so just tell me what you liked or what you didn't, thanks.

nice art
thanks for upload

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Misaki's hair is partially uncolored on the bottom panel of page 15. Other than that, great job!

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Admittedly it's a bid weird their bellies have red spots.

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nice，thanks

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on page 8 misaki's left leg on the top right. she should be wearing her white stocking, but it is colored raw
and in railgun electricity effect are more white than the color here, but honestly I think it is fine as it is

Last edited on 08 January 2022, 00:04.

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这个本真的太棒了！！！

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Damn, this natural threesome fuck session is incredibly good.

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我记得以前有个汉化的啊

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教主应得的

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