Hello everyone it's me again with yet another episode. As always, thank you all who have been following my work after all of this time. Thank you.

Now, on the episode we're on the main juice, with this episode 10 and what is to come we'll get most of the characters together to fight this mysterious villain.

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@Evankstein Evank, this is nice work, but can I give a piece of advice?

The whole series is just too sweet & lovely, all the characters are just polite and friendly to each other all the time. I really hope the story could go a bit more hardcore, like the main characters / protagonist could be forced / blackmailed / gangbanged or something like that.

Oh, and there should definitely be more dirty talk, instead of just thoughts displayed.

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Another great chapter. I appreciate @evankstein breaking Ch 10 into two parts as there was a lot to unload (no pun :3) lore wise and character development in this chapter.

I don't if this is praised enough but how Evan is able to simultaneously progress different stories at different locations at the same time. Here we had 3 worlds ( caverns with vanah and elke, 2A/2B mind world, and Oldworld forest). Thats is beautiful planning and writing so kudos to Evan for doing this well.

I disagree with the post above that the characters in the story are too lovely with each other all the time. There is established tension between characters (i.e. Rachel's discontent with Elke or Johanna over treatment of Chel, Oldword residents disliking seythira). I love the built-up tension in the relationships between characters and it only adds to the payoff later when a sex scene finally happens :3

My only critique would be in the sex scenes I would like to see more panels dedicated to an act. So for example, breast/nipple rubbing or passionate kissing maybe dedicate a few more panels to put more focus on the act itself. Also, would love to see more paizuri or nipple fucking.

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