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.....since when is an in-law considered incest/inseki?

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We need a continuation of this damnn

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@blackkat101 Incest, no. Inseki, it's the very definition.

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thanks for the hard work and congratulations on a first release!
there are some words jarringly cut in the bubbles. for example:
"everyt
hing?"
"indescriba
ble"
and some bits of typos as well. more QC before releasing should've allowed you to catch and fix these kinds of errors.
some better font selection can also go a long way to make this more enjoyable to read.
overall not so bad for a first effort, keep it up!

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I wonder if the husband is a closeted gay considering he hasn't fucked his wife for so long.

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@blackkat101 inseki is sexual relations with a non blood relative

the whole right to left instead of usual left to right is a bit unusual

of course the MC would be a womanising douche wit ha big dick complex

typical

"i want to fuck you"
no you cant
i will anyway
no you cant
you have no choice,
ok i love you"

i fucking hate this bullshit, it ruins the story 100%

Last edited on 05 August 2021, 03:00.

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Have to say, if either of my brothers looked as scummy as the BIL here, I'd never let them within 100 miles of my family.

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Who in the fuck doesn't fuck in 8 whole god damn years. Sorry husband-san but this in on YOU. I getting working hard but to work so much that you can't provide basic human needs like sexual satisfaction is crazy.

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The brother-in-law is a scumbag, but the wife is the worst of the two. You mean to tell me that you have it "hide it" form your husband you own a vibrator? That was the McGuffin that kicked this shit off. Not having sex in 8 years is also stupid and to be fair, it's just as much her fault as it is her husbands if she doesn't voice her concern with their eight-year celibacy. No where in the story does it say nor imply that she made an attempt to be more sexually active with her husband. In fact, she went the worst route by hiding it and talking about the issue with someone outside of the marriage first. And don't get me started on that dogshit logic of "Oh, what will happen to the relationship between brothers?" If you got raped, the rapist's "healthy relationship" with other people should be the furthest thing on your mind. Cheating on your husband and eventually growing attached to his brother is better in your mind? I know NTR defenders often complain at us for "trying to apply logic" but they're turbo retarded too. This story is guilty of applying logic first. And the logic was dogshit and the worst options on the table.

If this story gets revenisted, I hope she and the brother-in-law gets their comeuppance. Or have the husband get back at them by having some fun of his own.

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