the original Japanese can be found here

https://e-hentai.org/g/641519/d8c9d719b5/

this is something I did as part of a trade with somebody

if you are interested in having something translated, feel free to send me a message on the forums or email me at onarakunka@gmail.com

futanari part left untranslated for obvious reasons

any comments or critique on the translation or typesetting would be appreciated

No, the main reason for Hisui works being left untranslated does not have an obvious reason >.>

Base +7, AncientPhoenix +7, Devastator325 +6, Mikle3000 +18, justlookingforporn +6, sable1 +24, Demoni +7, chaos-x +42, Lewdduck420 +5, Soldier A +6, Ahegaosensei +6, Maxilink +6, Margnon +6, and 4 more...

"futanari part left untranslated for obvious reasons"

I'm not aware of any reason, so could you please elaborate?

Base +6, HeavHo +13, negixnodoka +6, AncientPhoenix +7, Devastator325 +6, kingra3 +7, Margnon +6, ART65 +6, justlookingforporn +6, sable1 +24, Demoni +7, chaos-x +42, Lewdduck420 +5, and 12 more...

Bruh, where's the futanari?

Base +8, Devastator325 +6, Mikle3000 +18, AncientPhoenix +7, Demoni +7, chaos-x +42, Soldier A +6, Ahegaosensei +6, Maxilink +6, wolf1022 +12, the missing link +9, justlookingforporn +6, JigglyBop +2, and 3 more...

It's ironic that the author's Afterword section was translated and included. Without that, readers of the translation wouldn't know anything was missing as the author doesn't number his pages.

Base +29, Soldier A +6, Ahegaosensei +6, AncientPhoenix +7, Devastator325 +6, SekiraUbica +6, Keric22 +6