Hello everyone, allow me to introduce both me and my very first attempt at a comic.
I am primarily a video game creator but wished to have a go at making comics alongside game production for both some extra revenue and something different.
This particular comic shall focus on feminization to gender transformation. I shall try to get an update out every month or so whilst working on both my game and these comics concurrently.

Update: Chapter 4 is now publicly available! Enjoy!

Chapter list:
Chapter 1: Pages 1 to 91
Chapter 2: Pages 92 to 159
Chapter 3: Pages 160 to 209
Chapter 4: Pages 210 to 267

I was inspired to dip my toes into comic creation after seeing Moonlly's work, which has most definitely had an influence on me, and I personally don't believe that there's enough MtF/ feminization content out there, so here is my contribution to this particular genre.

If you enjoyed this comic and want access to other Patreon-only comics 'Maid Different' (which I am allowing supporters to vote on the outcome of) and 'The Yokai's Tail' then I would appreciate any support that you could give at:
https://www.patreon.com/massmanic/

the plot is very interesting, look forward to it.

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There's potential. I'll keep an eye on this one.

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Wow, I'm glad that my work inspired you to make comics~ And this comic looks really promising! I can't wait to see how to plot unfolds. Keep up the good work!

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Not related to this but will you ever release another public build of TLoK?

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I don't usually love non consensual tg stories, but this is pretty fun!

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I am loving your comics! I can't wait to see more!

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Dear lord, is this one of the best one's out there.

Not only is the pace pretty good, but you have managed to insert some pretty interesting characters out there in the mix.

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Great work. It's getting very good and I can't wait to see more.

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i think there was a mix up with pages starting with page 132

I like this story but the page placements are horrible and make reading it painful.
I would highly suggest looking up guides on this. Specifically look into eye movement and the flow of text and pictures. With that alone you would double the value of your writing.

Last edited on 03 October 2021, 02:48.

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On one hand I was interested to see where this will go because the start was promising.... But on the other this is getting very boring. Similar to other comics of this style that are paced horribly and stretched out to keep patro 's subscribed while getting nowhere...

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397: Ah yes, the "apalling incident" that earlier in the comic was oficially confirmed to have been a misunderstanding blown out of proportion.

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@JuankiMan

Hmm, I thought I got it across that the headteacher didn't quite believe Ken as she dislikes him. Maybe I should have made it a bit more clear somehow? The actual scene where this is alluded to is on page 135 and her subsequent treatment of Ken. On page 135 she states that Emily explained "the assault MAY HAVE been an accident". Maybe I should have put that part in bold to emphasize it?
Other characters believe it was an accident after Emily telling them (such as Lola) but not the headteacher.

Also I misspelt 'appalling'. :O

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Loving this story and the body transformations. Looking forward to it expanding further!

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@nitrousrun

Thanks! I'd say it's roughly halfway through now, so things shall be picking up!

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I am surprised that is your first attempt. The comic is better than what I was expecting initially and even funny. I though that you had some previous experience.

Yeah. There is not enough MtF/ feminization content and sometimes is not too good or even too short. If you want to learn from more from this there is Sieght. I liked some of his works:

https://e-hentai.org/uploader/Sieght

Even remembering that the Ken aunt compared Emily with his mother I am surprised for her change of behaviour and interest in Ken. I changed my mind about her while I was reading it.

Hoping that Emily can obtain at least 2 more body upgrades before the end. Probably that phone conversation only made her even more interested in continue drinking that milk with Ken saying that Lola is more his type.

Tim seems that kind of character than later is revealed as a girl.

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@vickze

When I do another series it shall be much faster paced I think, I like the slower experience but everyone's tastes are different. I'm not going to be changing the pacing too much, as it'll clash with the rest of the comic so I'll just take this as a learning experience.

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@massmanic

I would not worry too much. Not when your story Plot works.

Go too fast sometimes can ruin it. Just watch the current review. Sometimes is better go slow and give sense to the story development.

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@massmanic

I've really enjoyed the slow burn in this. I'm always a sucker for well developed characters and romances, there being feminization and subsequent yuri is just a plus

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@leileis

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

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Came for the feminization, stayed for the cute romance. You can do it, Emily!! But, on the other hand, Tim is *so* cute... but Emily!!

Thanks for sharing :D this is great

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@suchipi

Not a problem!

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Really enjoyed the series. Great work!

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@manucode

Thanks!

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The change to the page layout is a massive improvement. Very nice.
It was a far more enjoyable read for sure. And the introduction to it was unexpected and cute, if a little unnecessary, but hey it is your style and I will take it with a joyous smile. ^_^

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@masterzelda123
Just thought a nice tongue-in-cheek guide would be entertaining, I'm happy that the new style has improved the reading experience. :)

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The cow milking dream sequence was hilarious. Actually, all the dream sequences have been good.

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@Cryptnotic

Thanks, I'm happy as long as people are enjoying it!

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The romance seems very promising

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Gotta admit I was about to skip this comic as I dislike futanari and feminization. Glad I didn't do it in the end because there's some nice and interesting content here and there. I'm into BE so Emily's growing is quite satisfying to see (even though I dislike lolicon too). However, seeing Ken conflicting with his "other self", which is like some kind of persona with a different perspective than his "conscious self", is quite fun to see. I loved it when his hair grew too. I love long hair. Good work.

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@IERHentai

Thanks!

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The quality get better in the latest release.. nice works.. gonna check your patreon

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@Sveranya

Thanks, it's my first writing piece so I know I've not been perfect with it but I am always trying to improve.

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Sorry, but that whole "jekyll and hyde" thing just ruins the story for me

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@DarkCocoon

Different strokes, different people. I wanted to go somewhere off the beaten path plot-wise.

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Well done! Keep it up!

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@newey_
Thanks! Happy Valentines Day!

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it scared me，the story is terror

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Is this still on-going or has this been dropped?

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Hope it comes back...

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For those unaware, hes still active but pretty much all his new content released so far now became Patreon-excluisve...

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Hey everyone, the author here.

Over this past year I have had a tough time battling depression and, without going into too much grizzly detail, I was on the verge of nearly losing to it.

During this dark time period I refrained from posting publicly as I didn't want to attract more patrons as my upload quantity was sporadic- contingent on how my
mood was during the work week; sometimes I could produce 20 pages a week, other times it was 3. Without consistency in what I produced, I felt an incredible level of guilt for
not getting content out to all of my patrons, whom I appreciate majorly for supporting me and getting me out of a terrible job, and who feel I owe a great debt to. This guilt, as you can imagine,
fed the demon of depression.

I am currently recovering from the depression/ learning to live with it, but the process is slow. When I recover fully and prove to myself and my patrons that I can provide content on a regular basis
in the long-term I'll be back.

TL:DR: I stopped uploading publicly to lessen the money/patrons coming in until I improved myself as a form of self-preservation and not to disappoint potential new supporters.

Last edited on 12 June 2023, 23:51.

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