Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1191473/3778047fb3/

I'm not very good at English so I can't proof reading all of them so there may have some grammatical error and inconsistency in words using.

I think I would have liked it better without the mind control stuff. It's nice to have these characters just enjoy sex instead of them being magically forced into liking it but subconsciously hating it. Reading this I just skip the pages with those parts, it's more fun that way.

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Good grief. Why would you translate to a language you aren't proficient in? Even putting that aside, you fucked up the terms, too.

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