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Why does the ending feel like he plans to do something? Yet in the book there is no second chapter for this?

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@Letmeinjoe09 Because open endings are the NTR artists' go-to for when they can't(or won't) do a proper conclusion even though they hint at something more.

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This is lackluster. No wonder it got such a low rating with such a dumb plot and ending.

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I wonder if your willing to translate this and its sequel
https://e-hentai.org/s/8343445d94/740377-122
https://e-hentai.org/s/8ccb31b3b5/755665-169

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I think Page 10 has a typo " You didn't know that even though you're his son" It should be "her", so it should be "You didn't know that even though you're her son"

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@Forgunia dumb, lackluster, stupid ending, pretty much the definition of NTR

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I hate it when the MC doesn't even tell the other person he knows, like this.

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