RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1375714/10c1aba484/

Shamelessly copied comment from klermun:

Thanks for translating this. Unfortunately you fell for the newbie trap and used the 1280x resolution resample pages for editing instead of the original raw which is around ~2072 x 3005. For gallery viewing, e-hentai downsamples all images to 1280x resolution so if you downloaded the pages without using the original source link, you got the reduced version instead.

Another possibility is that you downloaded the raw from one of the aggregator sites such as NH. These sites only copy galleries from e-hentai at resample quality and thus don't have the original resolution versions available. You shouldn't use these sites as a source for your raws.

Always check that you're using the original raw before you start editing. If you ever see the resolution being 1280x something, then most of the time that means something is wrong and you got the wrong version.

Here's some ways you can download the original full resolution version of any gallery on e-hentai:
1) Torrent download if a torrent is available. Avoid any torrents labeled 1280x though.
2) Click on Archive download and then Download Original Archive.
3) If you prefer to download one page at a time, make sure you download using the Download Original Source link located below each opened image in the gallery.

Base +38, Psychotic Pastry +6, firehaz +11, 1d10t +6

Pitou is male but anyway....

Base +6, xoril -7, Glovelove. +7, mmsofpower -10, Crazy Eights -6, sable1 -24, Fate Averruncus -8, BakaG -7, xw1as -9, skunsas -6, Naruto0116 -6, lnshift9xshift0 -6

So when Hina's stomach inflates again is it because Cheetu knocked her up or is his cum cursed?

Base +27

If anyone can find a high resolution ver of it, then pls share. I will update the pages with text.

Base +3, ciley39 +1, 1d10t -6

just tagging a portion since it's tough to get through the whole thing with the LQ raws and cleaning. but you keep inserting your own text or just guessing what the text is supposed to be
scanmark pg 6

002
OG: はいはいはーい
TL: "You got beaten din't[sic] you?"
ED: you just rewrote this line

003
OG: これ確認？
TL: "Are you sure about this?"
ED: he's asking her if this is what she wants to check

007
OG: ね…シャル
TL: "I love you...Charles"
ED: "Hey...Charles"

OG: 出すね
TL: "I'll take it out"
ED: "I'm cumming, okay?"

OG: ナカに出すのって…
TL: "I can't get it out."
ED: "I'm gonna cum inside you..."

09
OG: シャルほどじゃないけどアンタも弱いね
TL: "Not as good as Charles. But...you're weak, too"
ED: it's the opposite. she says he's not as bad as Charles

OG: うるせーオレはもっとシンプルなゲームが得意なんだよ
TL: "I'm sure you'll love it. The best game in the world!"
ED: "Shut up, I'm better at simpler games"

OG: ちっナメやがって
TL: "Fuck, you've got to be kidding me."
ED: "Tch, you're looking down on me"

OG: (nothing)
TL: "Hu?"
ED: you added text that wasn't there

010
OG: げ
TL: "How did I lose"
ED: "Geh" this is just a reaction of disgust

011
OG: 裏っ
TL: "Head"
ED: tails lol

012
OG: 負けたらなんでも / だろマチ
TL: "If you lose" / "You lose every thing. Right?"
ED: if we use your translation on pg 9 then this line should be like "If you lose, you'll do whatever I say" / "Right, Machi?"

Base +18, 1d10t +6