So new translator on the block.
Testing the waters with a rather obscure artist. Any suggestions, mistakes to point out, etc are welcome.
Everything done by me but it was a tad of a pain, if there are TSs/editors/etc looking to form a group I'd be willing to try.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1981860/7b3b7ce56f/

2nd attempt, That was me messing with jpg compression options and stuff, weird that it only messed up some of the pics.

Anyone else have problems with page 2 and 3? They won't load no matter what I press.
Edit: actually many of the pages won't.

Base +11, JoshB2084 +6, bbob1980 +6

Not only page 2 and 3. Other pages won't load for me.

Even the downloaded file in the torrent. Lots of pages are corrupted. I can only open page 1

Edit: Regardless, thank you for the translation. Pages are loading now.

Last edited on 18 August 2021, 11:22.

Base +8, yohancarin +6, JoshB2084 +6, bbob1980 +6, Nartousamaci +6

@iamjohn1337 Torrent works fine for me.

Base +11, Ejherbie +6

Holy shit 1st Nayonayo work in English. Thank you very much for this. I hope you'll translate more of his work.

Base +8

Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/1982995/d7e92f5910/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/1984768/92189acbba/
English: https://e-hentai.org/g/1987376/c9c82623c8/ (here)
Thanks for translating this!

Base +42, Nartousamaci +6

Downloaded updated JPG picture archive and created a torrent
Also voted to expunge corrupted torrent "[Gomikasu Tarou]A tale of the temptation of my friend's stepmom and sister[English].zip"

Base +3, bbob1980 +6

Looking forward to more of this series

Base +6

Truly glorious. It's so refreshing to see a doujinshi with its own distinct art style, instead of the generic manga style you see everywhere nowadays.

Base +7, GGS +10, reifag +6, alphabetagama +8

so the wife, just sits on top of the stairs, flashing her pussy to the first person hoping its her husband? and the sister just walking into the bathroom not expecting anything to happen?

Base +6, reifag +6, janoosh +6, alphabetagama +8, shinnt +18

kudos on your first translation, thanks a lot for the hard work!
typesetting is good but you should use a tighter line spacing and maybe a smaller font size. leaving some visible space between the text and the borders is usually the norm for better readibility.
looking forward to your next ones!

Base +18, Megarock90 +7

Hot as fucking hell.

Base +13

Really nice, thank you.

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