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Thank you!

Base +7

This is such a massive improvement in terms of overall quality compared to your previous works. I kinda feel like I comment on a lot of your shit, but you keep working on big name artists lol

Two points:

1) You ignore punctuation a lot (periods, mostly), and sometimes capitalization. Also, many weird commas. Other than that, it's looking good!
2) Some of your translation is off. You're either taking too many liberties, or (and I hope that's not the case) you don't have a good enough understanding of Japanese. Here's an example:

Page 3: も。。。もちろん存じ上げておりますわ！こうやっておまんこを擦り付けて挨拶するんでしょう！馬鹿になさらないでくださいまし！

"O-obviously I have full understanding of this tradition! I know that you have to rub your thing on my vagina! Please don't think that I'm a complete fool!"

This should be: "O... of course I know that! [that it's common sense for girls and boys to greet each other that way]" "You greet them [the boys] by rubbing your pussy against them [their cock] like so!" "Don't make light of me, please!" OR (and more in line with the bratty, I'm-superior-to-you personality) "Please don't be ridiculous!" Either way, the idea's maintained.

This entire sequence stems from you mis-translating 挨拶 as "meeting/meet" instead of what it actually means in context, which is "greeting/greet".

I could go on, but you get the idea.

Last edited on 30 August 2021, 21:44.

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>when every guy in the school has magic isekai MC dick

Base +6, LordHerac +4

I'll be taking the green haired girl, thanks.

Base +6, SaiMasterFag -6, gloriousstalin +6

the last two is the best kind to see the contrast of them into cock hungry slut

Base +15, Shade080 +8

Does someone have GTS lesson 3 translated?

Base +6