Megaton Musings: To certain other uploaders: DO BETTER and improve yourselves. I've always been pretty forgiving and encouraging new people to get into TL/Editing because more people translating (at least competently if not well) and editing is usually a good thing but this last year seems to have had a huge surge in lackluster effort...Also, watch this space for more upcoming releases.

Here be my bounties with other things.

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Commissioned by: Megaton
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Finally, some good fucking food.

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Thanks for this, much better. But as Daruna said for the other version, shouldn't her name be Alisa, not Arisa, since it's in katakana and she's clearly foreign? Or were you thinking half foreign?

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@quazkov
Much debating was had on that question, and it was compromised to Arisa.

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Lewd shy Thicc girl is really an amazing combo

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Sadly the ending sucked.

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@Megaton

After seeing that god awful first translation of this story my heart sank cuz I believed we would never get a good translation of this story by Furari-sensei, especially since this work hadn’t been translated into English before. Thank you for saving this story by commissioning the translation! Not many stories get a second shot at redemption that is why I’m extremely grateful to you and the translation team (RedLantern + cutegyaruTL) for your hard work!

Last edited on 30 September 2021, 03:46.

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good content, good girl, good TL

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What the fuck with this development? Woman of your dream happened to be god tier... prostitute??? ;__________;

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Don't get me wrong: there's nothing wrong with a virgin girl. But if your cock is so awesome it makes a very sexually experienced woman quake in the knees and wanna be yours permanently, that means you are god tier and essentially NTR proof.

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Not many people will be able to say when they die "I had sex with a goddess."
I will.

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Oh so she's a prostitute

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