the original japanese can be found here on pages 5-12

https://e-hentai.org/g/902804/2304b91b4c/

this was something I translated as a part of a trade with someone

if you are interested in having something translated, feel free to send me a message on the forums or email me at onarakunka@gmail.com

any comments or critique on the translation or typesetting would be appreciated

Jam is probably the first ever game character shown to change her panties every day.

https://www.neogaf.com/threads/is-jam-guilty-gear-the-first-game-character-that-changes-her-panties-everyday-nsfw.1128800/

Polka dots... that's Wednesday.

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No critique from me.
Almost nobody ever bothers to translate the sfx-text, which is a shame but probably takes too much time I'm assuming.
The font-styles were clean and appropriate.
Rotating, morphing and aligning them to emulate the original text must've been a pain in the ass too.
Really impressive work here.

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@Petsura

Generally, something like this with the redraws and the added SFX averages out to 40-60 minutes a page for me. I don't know if that is considered particularly fast or slow in terms of typesetting.
I like to avoid typesetting if I can, but the guy I sometimes hire to do it (midari) isn't willing to do heavy SFX stuff, and the SFX replacement was specifically requested by the guy who this was translated for.

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the focus on Jack-os ass and the pages where she masturbates are such a treat.

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