No critique from me. Almost nobody ever bothers to translate the sfx-text, which is a shame but probably takes too much time I'm assuming. The font-styles were clean and appropriate. Rotating, morphing and aligning them to emulate the original text must've been a pain in the ass too. Really impressive work here.
Base +6, Revengeancedude77 +6, butt1234123412341234 +6
Generally, something like this with the redraws and the added SFX averages out to 40-60 minutes a page for me. I don't know if that is considered particularly fast or slow in terms of typesetting. I like to avoid typesetting if I can, but the guy I sometimes hire to do it (midari) isn't willing to do heavy SFX stuff, and the SFX replacement was specifically requested by the guy who this was translated for.