is this a rewrite? the dialog is retarded like a rewrite. the font is really crappy like a rewrite. a sound effect that appears like 4 times while she is sucking dicks is "burp". would any self respecting translator think "burp" was a good way to convey sound effects?

Base +7, Juansmarts +8, Lyncs +6

Wish he'd come back and finish by doing a Pluto one and Uranus one

Base +5