(Dai 2-Kai Ultra Summer Festa) [purplrpouni (Kawai)] Watashi ga Danshi ni Moteru Wake | To Be Popular With Boys, I Will... [English] [DKKMD Translations]
better than a good chunk of the english TLs here, and good enough to understand exactly what's happening in the story, but still not great
p2: "fantasize of being popular" => fantasize about p5: "don't just jump in on me like that": you "jump in on" conversations, not people p8: "it's pretty wet down here, so they must be sensitive": who's "they"? one girl's pussy should be singular p8: "that kind of shakes and squirts" uhhh p9: "this is the first time i feel so good" p10: "wants a turn at me" p13: "is exciting me too": i've only heard "excite" used like this for subatomic particles, not people. "is getting me excited too" maybe p15: "poke on me" p16: "who's got next" p18: "thank goodness this happens" p18: "fall in line" means becoming obedient, not literally getting in line p20: "i'm going to fuck a baby in that womb of yours" ??? vro???
also just a lot of awkward mixing of overly formal/long vocabulary with attempts at colloquial speech
edit: lmao the "proofreader"/"quality" checker downvoted this comment what a fucking loser
Last edited on 03 October 2021, 05:00.
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It would be courteous to mention which images were updated so we would not have to download the whole gallery... again. For those who downloaded the first upload, the updated images are 2, 5, 8, 9, 10, 13, 15, 18, 20, 21 and the credits page.