Not entirely sure if I read their last name right, but the rest of the *story* beats should be about right. Wonder how well I did for a first translation attempt? Oh well, stay awesome!!

-Redigor

The family name is probably Kokonoe, though there are a few other readings it could have, like Kue or Kunou (https://jisho.org/search/%E4%B9%9D%E9%87%8D%20%23names)
edit: actually it does give the reading in the first page, it's Kokonoe. I was reading the second and third pages only.

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thanks for the translation!

Don't translate characters' names to chinese reading though. I can't take the translation seriously when it has stuff like that.

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Judging by both the titlebar including the name of the group who did the Chinese translation of this (found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1985269/fbd650f71c/) and the absolute abomination of the translation quality in just the first panel, I'm going to guess you did a game of telephone from CN to EN here.

In fact, you even left 中国翻訳 ("Chinese Translation") in the Japanese namebar, meaning you copypasted the title from the CN gallery, and you presumably don't know what 英訳 means, or that it goes in place of 中国翻訳. Wow.

Please don't do this. We already have Xinsu, we don't need more of this. Learn Japanese.

edit: Welp, seems this needs a complete rescue. Yet another one to add to the pile.

Last edited on 05 October 2021, 02:43.

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Noted, apologies.

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Only checked the older sister profile on page two, but it's missing whole parts, like "Oppai" under her weaknesses and a whole line about how she's the embodiment of "Yamato Nadeshiko" and such. And somehow her "Ouma" weakness became "big cocks". (both sisters are weak to Ouma)

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什么鬼，英文翻译怎么用到中国翻译的标题了。

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Gallery can be updated by the way if you plan on fixing the issues.

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Dude went from normal sized to gigantic in other panels, there's no consistency to his height and build.

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@darstard

people being mad at you xD well its anoying when change to much what it was originally

but good vibes to you bro im sure u gonna learn from this mistakes and then be more carefull with what u do

i still apreciate u try and wish u become better doin it no just give up

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What a beautiful Duwang

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I'll be honest, I was happy as heck when I saw this in English, then the tags told me "nope" and well, I guess I'm back to waiting for a proper translation. :(

Still, wether it's the correct translation or a rewrite, Chika's weaknesses being "having her womb poked" and "big cocks" made me laugh, clearly she's Ouma's future bride. <3

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Best Mom's giving Ouma all the cheat codes for her daughters, as if he needed em!

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raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/0e76503dfc/1950480-142
another thing to note, it uses the resampled 1280 x 1808 instead of the original 1359 x 1920 pages

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Don't mind.You can do it better next time!

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