Translated by: Shimon / Grosso

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Or don't, I ain't your daddy.

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English translated by Doujins.com (You are here)

Thanks.

Last edited on 14 October 2021, 02:56.

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>Ntr hotel

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To be continue !!!! Hell yeah !!!!

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The first page literally tells you he's gonna lose. Why even bother at that point?

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Writing a character whose listed characteristics include him having erectile dysfunction is about as overcompensating as you can get. You might as well have made his name "_____" and then insert the name of whomever you hate there.

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The art is pretty good but why the hell would they spoil the story before it even starts with that unnecessary bio page. It's obvious what's going to happen in the sequel. MC wont satisfy her and she will go running back to the gyaru-oh.

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So the mc has a small dick, premature ejaculation, erection problems and come 1 time only, they only left out a std disease or some incurable cancer!!!, this was so cliché that the sequel can write alone!!!!

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Wow. I guess the artist thought "burying the lead" was pointless. XD

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official English version for those who want to support the artist.
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ341051.html

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The brother needs to watch out because this is not some weakling pushover but, according to the bio on the second page, a karate tournament champion. If he fucks around and pisses him off enough all it takes is one solid kick and he will never fuck again.

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Arts is really great and i don't care about the plot anyways.

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would be pretty fucking dope if author decide MC despair lead him to fuck up his brother since he is a karate champion
but who knows, that would be too good to be true

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The writing and dialogue is so uninspiring, predictable and lame that I kinda feel bad for the translator that he was subjected to this.
Added to that we have tanned chad the thundercock, MC with small and unimpressive peen and his girlfriend who is a crossover of Houki Shinonono from Infinite Stratos with an ahegao drawn by Takeda Hiromitsu.

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> GAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

I love this circle's name.

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feels like Author has a grudge to a person named Tatsurou or he's overcompensating on something. jesus christ those negative traits are way too specific might as well kill the guy lol

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No condom would have been better.

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Wonder what Tatsurou did to the author

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and tatsurou become cuck, END

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"To be continued..."

YEE.

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The low sale numbers of the official translation says a lot.

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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You know the author made this out of hatred for someone. Whoever translated this had better be paid well or got a lot of drugs.

As unsinspired as can be.

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So any news about the sequel? Does the author have a blog or public twiter?

EDIT: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/103426083 part 2 finally coming, says is C101 so look out people!

Last edited on 02 January 2023, 01:47.

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it's been three years... i don't understand porn commentators that argue about the plot. the art is great, the sex is hot. the plot is just a vehicle for those two things.

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@whatthetit imagine getting served a 5* restaurant gourmet dish on a plate covered in steaming hot shit

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