Pretty harsh femdom story, only for hard masochists.
Thanks for all the criticism and gratitude/encouragement but since it's a pure hobbyists project then you need to forgive my more laidback stance on the graphic part but maybe it is for the better if I won't touch the cg text free galleries till I become better at gimp.
I thought about improving my last translation but apparently, we have a volunteer for this task so we all owe him a big one.

original : https://e-hentai.org/g/1180507/4db4fb76a0/

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ190559.html
(as the time of publishing this, most of this circle works are on 90% sale)

> I thought about improving my last translation but apparently, we have a volunteer for this task so we all owe him a big one.
I wonder...:P

Well at least this one had the textless version so you didn't have to scribble or put huge white boxes over the japanese...
And I see a slight improvement on the typesetting BUT, you should put an outline (white on darker colors, black on lighter colors) on the text, otherwise it will look terrible on multicolored BGs.
And this is the case. Ugh. It looks heinous.
The english, well, it is what it is.

Considering the amount of work I'm having to do on the other one idk if I want to fix this one too, tbh lol.
If someone makes a list of corrections to the TL (not just QC, just to be clear) I'll consider that, haha.

edit: read it from start to end, yeah, english is ehhh...

Also, I kinda don't believe she actually broke his testicles with the "much" she did.
Testicles, like every other organ having priviledged immunity in the human body, has a very strong barrier to avoid any type of unwanted communication with the outside world or the rest of the body.
This makes the scrotum very, very resilient. To the point it can withstand pressures of tens of kilograms. That are, by the way, type of forces some stronger people may have in their full hand grip.
Yeah. Full grip. Of a kinda strong person. Here we have a highschool girl, not really a strong person, and she just randomly threw some unfocused blunt force on them in the form of punches.
That or just a couple of mild kicks definitely isn't enough to break a man's testicles. Not even closely. Otherwise most people doing ballbusting BSDM irl would be dead the day after, lol.

Speaking of the overall plot...it has some pluses and minuses compared to the previously translated work.
As a plus: there is no infidelity in this (and while until the last 3 pages there wasn't any on the other work either, in the end of that Karen made more slaves other than MC and was still hunting for more), and this is a plus on my book. I like 1v1 relationships. Especially BSDM ones. Isn't that nice when all the affection torture is not spread to multiple people but focused on one? Aww.
Also, better use of the assets to build the cg. Even though the girl always only has two expressions for each sprite and not more.

But, as a minus, that last page. I hate when it ends like this.
IMHO it would've been hotter if there were an extra page after the last one, where he would get down on his knees and beg her to not throw him and how his life was pointless without her, to which she would say something on the lines that after all he wouldn't be able to live for one more day without her and that it's her responsibility, as his owner, to look after him, and this would result in him turning into her literal pet (no more human clothes nor living at his home, no more human talking, and unconditional and absolute obedience to her). And to end it all, her grabbing him by his swollen balls and telling him he is getting further punishment because, while he properly kneeled to beg, he spoke before she could give (or deny) him permission to (as she said on page 9), and this is not acceptable.
If it ended like that, instead with a bad breakup, it would've been the best. And also in line with this type of femdom works. IMHO (x2).

Happy Locktober everyone.

Last edited on 17 October 2021, 00:08.

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Thank you for translation! You became much better then before.waiting for next translation!

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Excellent work! This story is very similar to a couple of stories by netorare masochist. I love the idea of the spiked cage, and think it's hilarious. Can hardly wait to see what you do next. I hear what you're saying about the backgrounds. They are a super pain in the ass. I'm currently working on the Dokusai Switch Island School and it's driving me batty having to do a fair number of the backgrounds, and a shitload of dialog, but I love it. As you say, it's a hobby.

There are a lot more Netorare Masochist and Dokusai Switch stories that I'd like to see done, after doing this first one, it will be a while before I tackle another though, I do have most of a script for the Dokusai Switch story about the world where women are in charge. Who knows, maybe me or you will get around to doing it.

PS: I don't want to sound ungrateful (because I'm not), but could you be careful with the red/pink text? I'm color blind and I'm having a hell of a time reading the text on pages like page 16.

Last edited on 23 October 2021, 09:55.

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