So I have been embarrassed to post all my old crap anywhere but f it. If people like it, they like it. If you want to see it early, check out my Patreon at Patreon.com/bear213

I remember seeing a older version (text only) of this one a long time ago.

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You know given the name of the story I didn't really expect to be interested in the story, yet, here we are. It is always to pleasure to see the art improving as well.

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Wait so his alarm went off at 9 but he had to be at work at 8? Immersion ruined.

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Sorry about the alarm. I wanted to edit it however I no longer have the original file when I first started. That’s my fault.

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i like it, just wish there were more sex scenes.

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Pg. 29 well that's an interesting way to make your mud armor look.

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I OBJECT!!!!!!

Mud is clearly Ground-element, not Rock.

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HEAVY EDIT: so a friend of mine told me my characters all sounded the same, that sex should feel more taboo and that everyone cusses too much. So despite being a porn comic, I decided to take some of his feedback and edit the majority of the comic. I took out a large chunk of the Vulgar language and made some characters sound more unique. Not taking out the sex, porn or pervertedness because again, porn comic where sex isn’t a taboo. If you don’t mind, give it a quick reread and tell me what you think.

Decided to continue the story but with the new designs. Call it lazy but I shouldn’t restart just because of the new designs. Will go back later but for now I’m continuing forward!

Last edited on 27 September 2021, 15:07.

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@Claw213 The radical change to the character's designs took me by surprise, at first, but as long as you're drawing what you feel is best, I can roll with it. Good luck!

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To help me improve my skills and abilities, any and all criticism is welcome, so long as there's context with it.

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