Chinese? English?

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@dongjinye With grammar this poor it could be either.

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你跟我说这是中文？？？

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Thanks for pointing out my bad grammar. I hope I can do better on the next translation.
And I'm sorry if it's a turn off for you guys and girls out there.

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Not a translation. You admit yourself you don't know jack shit about Japanese (and probably English) and used DeepL/Google Translate. Tagged as rewrite. Nice TL notes, by the way. "Big bro = aniki". Jesus, do you even know where you're posting?

Also, don't fucking use MangaTemple. Wild Words, Victory Speech, whatever. Just not that abomination of a font.

Before you "translate" anything else, please learn the fucking languages you're translating FROM and INTO. This is embarrassing. Also, it's already been done by FAKKU.

To justify the poor grammar tag:

Every page: Shit punctuation. Could tag it as poor grammar just based off of that.
p.2 the other => the others
p.4 lets => let's
p.5 this kid it's like that isn't it => this doesn't make any fucking sense.
p.5 hoo it's that so
p.7 i'ts
p.8 you like this kind of thing isn't it => don't you?
p.10 I too
p.10 I never though
p.11 good sniff of it => good whiff

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attn other TLers don't let this existing stop you from translating this please for the love of god lmao

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@cutegyaru i know a little bit of japanese (JLPT 4), but it's hard for me to get the word i wanted, that's why i use google translate and deepL at the sametime. But thank you for pointing out, i hope i can do my best on the next translation.

For the font, could you recommend the font i should use ? This is my first translation after all.

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N4 is not enough Japanese knowledge to be doing translations, not to mention your lack of English knowledge. Stop uploading galleries and go do some more studying.

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Hey look! A comic from that magazine rental service - where you pay them to own absolutely nothing!

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Bad font , rewrite , bad translating , advertising for Fakthem , just...stop dude...

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piss poor effort
i suggest you just torrent it

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I'm not gonna tear you a new asshole and dogpiling in on you. I commend you for your time and effort but that's it. You're an amateur with language barriers and that's ok. Either stick to your native or do it in a language that you're fluent in. People can tell when you're using GT/DL, it's subpar at best and shoddy at worst, and it came out as disingenuous.

I'm not telling you to quit if translating is something you're genuinely interested in. I'm telling you to stop for now and get some more experiences.

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It still has 4 1/2 stars so people did enjoy...

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LOL at the grammar!

Anyway, has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?

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Fuck. I was waiting for this one to be translated.
Now let's hope it will only take a few years for a proper translation.

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Holy shit. It says you used DeepL but the grammar's still all over the place. How the fuck is that even possible?
Literally the first line is wrong.

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It's a shitty rewrite. Purge it please.

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in translating it doesn't matter whatever JLPT level you have...

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I would not let that mouth come anywhere near my dick.

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