Translated and Decensored by Belldandy100
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Typo 007.jpg: you're

That font is unreadable. I don't mind this work, but please don't use it for future translations.

Base +9, Bubblejum +6

Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

Base +8, Chunga -18, Harkoz2 -6, Scumbini -30, Kudou Emika -6, ZeldaGuy21 +6, DarkFire493 -6

I understand you wanted to distinguish the voices and use a more effeminate font, but I agree that a cleaner and more legible font would be better. Otherwise, thank you!

Base +6, Bubblejum +6

Thanks, but please punctuate. I know JP versions rarely do, but in English you HAVE to put periods at the of your sentences and commas where necessary.

On typesetting, here's some useful resources: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/

Base +13, Lewdduck420 +6, Bubblejum +6, Megaton +45, DarkFire493 +6, observer1980 +21

Still worse typesetting than the old doujin-moe translation despite using the same font.

At least my eyes aren't bleeding now.

Base +9