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(C92) [JACK-POT (Jyura)] Tenkuu no Shoufu (Dragon Quest V) [English]

(C92) [JACK-POT (じゅら)] 天空の娼婦 (ドラゴンクエストV) [英訳]

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Posted:2021-11-14 06:28
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Language:English  TR
File Size:31.37 MiB
Length:21 pages
Favorited:1248 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.44

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Posted on 14 November 2021, 06:28 by:   bangrd    PM
Uploader Comment
Wtf, It's been 4 years but no one has translated it to English. Fine, I'll do it myself.
Hope you guys enjoyed it btw. Coli and Chill

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1105136/5620ef3754/

NOTE: I'm not sure about the accuracy of my translation but I'm pretty sure that I've butchered the grammar. I fucking hate grammar.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 06:45 by:   wootwoot123    PM
Score +6
Thanks for the translation !

A Jyura translation is always a good thing.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 07:21 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +128
Some typos, but mostly godawful punctuation. Also, your translation is extremely stiff and literal. You DID translate this, correct?

Positive note: typesetting is okay.

Cleaning: please watch out for dust (remnants after you remove the JP text). There's a lot of it.

p.3 What a huge racks!
p.3 Come on dance! Start shaking those boobs => Missing a comma and a period.
p.3 Look at those ass!
p.6 ...worked there too => Missing a period.
p.6 ...I'll beat his ass => Missing period.
p.6 ...again for a while => Missing period.
p.6 ...go to work... => Missed a period for the ellipses.
p.7 Shit punctuation everywhere. This is the same for every page, so I won't bother listing them out from this point on.
p.9 those trash face
p.21 I end up shooting it out in your face => I ended up shooting it on your face.
p.21 quickly => soon

Please improve before you keep translating.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 09:00 by:   Mr.Numbers    PM
Score +19
This is not netorare.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 09:39 by:   bigbro000    PM
Score -81
Bagus, sudah lebih improve dari sebelumnya. Semoga makin betah dan lancar nge-TL-nya! :)
Posted on 14 November 2021, 10:52 by:   doncosciadipollo    PM
Score +10
Anyone know what happened to JACK-POT? I haven't seen any new works for a long time.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 12:57 by:   Fatman of Love    PM
Score +21
Page 5 got me throwing question marks. Must've needed some magician stuff to get that pole in there.
Posted on 14 November 2021, 13:24 by:   gopha kierselph    PM
Score +16
Physics violation: Anybody else wonder how the pole got between the boobs with bra still in place? (pg 5)
Posted on 14 November 2021, 14:13 by:   AngraMainyuu    PM
Score +12
@doncosciadipollo i think they are drawing some non h series. you can check it on their twitter
Posted on 14 November 2021, 22:01 by:   Zenyuu    PM
Score +49
This translation sucks ass.

Please improve before you keep translating.

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