good senario, good length, great art, characters are as they should be, the best animes make the best doujinshi. biribiri is ftw! :D

Base +7, Brickster +6, Haku Kagurazaka +8, Toushin +16, LordLyciaX +4, Omocho +5, HXW +6, Deathscythe008 +2, frontsex +9, Incest1234 +8, tentacle-man61 +20, dom4 +6, dante444 +2, and 3 more...

Now this is the kind of scenario I LOVE! A beautiful relationship between two people who love each other deeply, yet they still manage to create a humorous situation. These galleries need more of these: "erotic novels gone manga", not "date rape in the bathroom" stories

Base +4, darkeve +5, M1jama +5, Toushin +16, LordLyciaX +4, Omocho +5, HabaneroJim +9, l33tsp00g3 +9, ashura_atsu +10, AnimeLov3rxXx +10, Otaku_King +7, Deathscythe008 +2, frontsex +9, and 14 more...

Okay the scenario was good up until page 46 when Touma says, Mikoto-tan is so moe. WTF man, Touma wouldn't say that. That's so otakuish. That one phrase just ruined the whole story. Ugh, now I'm beginning to wonder what the author is like.

Base +4, Toushin +16, Omocho -5, HabaneroJim -9, Darkvirus969 -5, umetal -9, dat PLOT -10, tentacle-man61 +20, nounambar -4, Pafrog -12, frontsex -14, Tsukigomori -5, josh1002 -6, and 2 more...

@Haiyami
Get your head out of your ass, please. I'm pretty sure "what the author's like" is a nerd, like all mangka. Hentai manga are srs bsns to you? Also, considering one of Touma's friends is Aogami, is it so odd for him to say that?

Anyway, this Doujin is 100% perfect. It has mikoXkuro, touXmiko, and is sweet and consensual. What is there to(for REAL reasons) dislike?

Base +9, nounambar +4, Tsukigomori +5, Vlad_Implier +7

Love this. There are good dôjinshi after all. :-)

Base +1

Why is it always their first time in every doujin their both in? Oh yea that last page was freakin funny

Base +8, dom4 +6, magarey -5

"Don't eat my panties!"
-Kuroko

Base +5, dom4 +6, conkikhon +5, Tsukigomori +5, Holyfang +6

I loved this so much.

Base +3

"Don't eat my panties!" Best line ever!

This story was great all the way through with great pacing and depiction of the character's personalities. The sex scenes were good and all the pages with extra little details and we'll fleshed out actions really helped the story.

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 7. Translation 7. True to character 9. All out of 10.

Base +10