This is the 2nd out of 4 doujins made by Raid Slash based on after Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha A's and prior to the StrikerS series. At the moment this is our group's recently translated doujin.
Oh yes :), if you are going to upload this doujin on to another site please have the credits page in the doujin. Thank you :)
These Raid Slash doujins are pretty awesome art/story-wise, but I just can't get over how OLD the characters act. It was hilarious when Nanoha told Precia that she was 11 in the first doujin...
I suppose this was kind of problem in the actual series too, jsut not quite to this extent.