Stockings, School Uniform, Dark Skin, Gyaru

This is painfully obvious that it's machine translated, as well as rewritten to some degree. If anyone wants to read it in decent English, it was translated a few months back here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1983259/d53216f8c4/

For proof of that, and the Poor Grammar tag:
"Black Gal Whirlwind Wakes Up" isn't even the title, it's Teddy Steady. In plain English, even in the Raws.
Zen is inaccurately named Zentsu here.
Rina's name is omitted repeatedly.
"I'm crazy" is completely wrong, it's asking if the other girl is jealous.
"Give me it back" should be more like "Give it back to me"
"I wish i can call out to you" for starters the I needs to be capitalized, and isn't even what's being said there anyway.
"Go home together" while grammatically accurate on its own is wrong here, It's not a command but a request so it should be "Let's go home together" or the like.
"Go Zentsu" should be "Let's go Zen", again not a command but a request.
"is't it Rina" well you remembered the name, but this line never mentioned her. Also that'd be "Isn't" for that kind of line anyway.

Barely three pages in and the list is already this long with multiple obvious rewrites and omissions. I'm stopping here.

Last edited on 25 November 2021, 06:40.

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Not only did you waste your own time by machine translating that was already TL'ed in proper english but you're also wasting server storage space uploading minimum-effort junk.

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MTL and wholly inferior to a pervious version posted above

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Why was this garbage not expunged? It was rejected? It's literally a crappy mistranslation of an already perfectly good doujin.

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@supermandffff
The reason this is allowed to exist is "different translation". Multiple translations (even trash ones) are allowed to co-exist. See https://ehwiki.org/wiki/Expunging#Different_Versions/. Things like this are, in my opinion, an abuse of that rule. Essentially no one *wants* these, but there isn't anything close to consensus at this time on what to do about it. The challenge is that the aim is for moderation policy to be based in objective standards, not subjective ones such as translation quality.

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