the japanese can be found here
https://e-hentai.org/g/2037661/77e4250c1b/

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this was a thing that I decided to translate in my free time

I plan to keep up with Nia stuff for the time being, but just to probably wait a few weeks or a month. I don't want to help enable a large group of people who would become reliant on pirate leaks of this person's paywalled content

if you are interested in having something translated, feel free to send me a message on the forums or email me at onarakunka@gmail.com

any comments or critique on the translation or typesetting would be appreciated

A few corrections that you may want to consider using:

P3
"Or rather" or "Moreover" or "Besides", not "Or more".

P4
"All of a sudden", not "all of the sudden".

P5
"Isn't it just water" or "It's just water", not "Is it just water".

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"Correct. It kinda has the ability to shrink men and ya know..."
And then she immediately moves to crush him with her abs, tits, and thighs. By God, I wish that were me.

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