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[purgatory (Shaa)] ten seconds sandbags [English] [FC][Digital]

[purgatory (シャー)] ten seconds sandbags [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2021-11-28 18:11
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Language:English  TR
File Size:42.87 MiB
Length:75 pages
Favorited:74 times
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Average: 4.00
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Posted on 28 November 2021, 18:11 by:   Kyden    PM
Uploader Comment
Commissioned by me

Credit/translator Fated Circle

Apologies for the error on the commission and translator credit.
Posted on 29 November 2021, 00:35 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +37
Here are some spelling and grammar corrections for the first half of this work. Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.

P02
"Employees", not "employess".

P04
"You'd better", not "You better".

P05
"Thankful", not "thanful".

P19
"It's not too muscular, either", not "neither".

P29
"Enough", not "enought".

P30
"You're the person to whom I owe my life", not "You're the person whom I owe my life".

P32
"She gained favor", not "She gained a favor".
Posted on 29 November 2021, 04:51 by:   Kyden    PM
Score +1
@mew_pao I actually don't know how to tweak any of the spelling, sorry this is my first upload and I updated my comment since I mixed up the commission with the translation credit.
Posted on 29 November 2021, 20:18 by:   clownworld    PM
Score +5
Damn awesome, one of the best doujins
Posted on 30 November 2021, 09:09 by:   Armory    PM
Score +11
Great job, I hope more of shaa gets translated someday.

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