A-One, a Neon Genesis Evangelion Doujinshi by Izurumi.

Are we sure this is a rewrite? The original wasn't translated the best from what I recall.

Base +5, rekon2 +7

...doesn't seem like this is a rewrite.

Base +6

http://www.doujinshi.org/book/1793/A-one/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/124788/73b3813759/
English Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/491/7e18c5a5d9/
French Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/412954/4f353846cd/
Spanish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/539284/7abaa1b642/
German Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/63172/2a5acece9d/
Polish Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/296397/ed99bfa228/
Russian Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/469074/63e00335b0/
Korean Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/416567/3bacc62d8d/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/229716/509afa1a03/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/306845/33d2274655/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/298030/18a62c2032/

Base +29

This doesn't seem to be a rewrite. It's just another translation of the doujin and with a much better font choice than the other earlier translation.

Base +12