I tried to translate the books from zuru. I hope you like it.

Marisa's thrill:
Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2075204/4fb36d2db7/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 1 reworked with another font: https://e-hentai.org/g/2083480/3b2f90391a/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2075982/596cf3abf1/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1468916/2ed633622c/
Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/2076710/19e8e4d98f/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/1757356/22b5c92217/
Part 4: https://e-hentai.org/g/2077608/d4c60cf46d/ --- Original: -
Part 5: https://e-hentai.org/g/2078514/78ea114ca4/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2052886/27dfe60497/
Part 6: https://e-hentai.org/g/2356996/c9990889e3/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2306410/8ca2181b2d/
Part 7: https://e-hentai.org/g/2362513/ca32385480/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2321034/fa41ec8429/
Part 8: https://e-hentai.org/g/2643424/f25642eb18/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2585546/7e8eee8c2d/

Escape Queen Juna:
Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2648169/426bae23ec/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2474740/c0dfe43183/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2768546/55501fe23f/ --- Original: https://e-hentai.org/g/2700481/c793ca3feb/

Don't use sans serif fonts for manga typesets. Please try to find yourself some nicer handwritten fonts, like Wild Words:
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html
https://www.reddit.com/r/manga/comments/3tkp0c/300_fonts_for_scanlation/

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Can't wait for the other parts, thanks for the translation!

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Here are some corrections to the first ten pages. Feel free to use them if you plan on updating this gallery.

P03
"I'm talking to you", not "I'm talking with you".

P04
"Am I disturbing you", not just "Am I disturbing".

P05
"Satori just wants your items", not "Satori just want's your items".
"What does he want", not "What do he want".

P07
"I avoided meeting other people", not "I avoided to meet other people".

P08
"Next time I'll have to leave earlier" or better yet "I'll have to leave earlier next time", not "Next time I have to go earlier".

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10 errors for poor grammar tag:
Pg 3. what do he want
Pg 3. want's
Pg 7. I avoided to meet
Pg 11. waiting and watch you sleeping
Pg 13. force you never
Pg 14. Please not
Pg 14. did you know what I'm going to do now
Pg 15. Than let me
Pg 15. introduce you your
Pg 15. realy

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Thank you for your feedback.
I'm sorry for my bad english
First I will translate the five parts.
Afterwards I will correct my mistakes. But I need to know what I made wrong.

Here is part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2075982/596cf3abf1/

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@zurusfan
"What you made wrong" was attempting to translate to a language you're not remotely fluent in without any sort of proofreading or editing. I've seen machine translations more coherent than this.

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@MightyHonks: Worse, they don't apparently don't know Japanese either, since the title of these books does not in any way translate to "Marisa's thrill - Take care of yourself." It's just bad from start to finish.

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I tried another font and implemented the translation corrections. You can find the new version here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2083480/3b2f90391a/
Thx @meow_pao for your help.

@MightyHonks: Which translator from japanese to english do you use? I can't find a good one. Sorry. I think google is the best, but it is not perfect.I will be happy, if you can tell me a better one. So i can check my translations.

@"Nomake Wan": Yes I thought about a good english translation for the title for a long time. It was really hard to find a good title.
It would be helpful if you could tell us how you would have translated the title?

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@zurusfan: The translator to use is called "actually learn the source language and have a firm grasp of the target language." If you don't understand Japanese and you don't have a firm grasp of English, you should not be "translating," period.

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@zurusfan you have done great, these bots are here just for harrasment.

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Art 6. Plot 7. Sexiness 6. Translation 2. All out of 10.

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Rough grammar:
p3: I'm talking with you! -> I'm talking to you!
p4: Am I disturbing? -> Am I disturbing you/something?
p5: what do he want from -> what does he want from
p5: Satori just want's -> Satori just wants
p7: I avoided to meet other people -> I avoided people or I avoided meeting others/other people
p7: He told me his favors, and he said, he likes me -> He told me his favors(?) extra comma after said.
p13: I will force you never see Kourin again -> I will force you to never see Kourin again.
p14: Please not. -> Not that.
p14: did you know what -> do you know what
p15: introduce you your -> introduce you to your
p15: realy -> really
p16: avoid anybody -> avoided everybody/people
p18: makes me -> make me
p21: Have I dreamed? -> Was it a dream?/Was I dreaming?
p22: haven't already started -> only just started
p22: I'll make you pay for -> I'll make you pay.
p22: want that I -> want me to
p23: see -> seeing

Last edited on 29 June 2022, 03:11.

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