Future Aya and Chisato spend an evening together.
将来で一緒に夕べを経つ彩ちゃんと千聖ちゃん。

Thanks to everyone commenting. I feel it's quite obvious this is my first translation, so I can most certainly use the criticism. I still hope that this is enjoyable, and I will be striving for better in future uploads.

Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/2074073/e662b58af9/

sweet yuri kisses.... thanks for sharing this!

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First things first, center your text. Do not align left.

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As others have pointed out, center the text instead of aligning them to the left. It will make it look neater and easier to read. Try to arrange the words to match the shape of the speech bubbles as well.

You may also want to consider reducing font sizes so that you can fit long words without splitting them awkwardly (like the word "together" in Page 16).

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Well, that was fast
Thanks, dude

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That was super cute!
And yeah reminds me of my first TL job, I used left aligned text, didn't use proper punctuation for everything and the font sizes weren't properly arranged... as long as you keep those things in mind in the future you'll do well!

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