If anyone plans on editing the grammar for the first chapter of this gallery, you may use the suggestions below as a guide:
P01 "Because of her absences lately", not "because her absence lately". "Because something unforeseeable happened", not "because of something unforseeable happened". "My first visit became something", not "my first visit has become something".
P02 Depending on what the raw says, "Meeting her parent on my first visit" or "Meeting her parent for the first time", not "Meeting her parent for the first time visit".
P03 "I want to deepen our relationship" or "I want to make our relationship more intimate", not "I want to further intimate our relationship".
P05 "Mom will teach you the steps" or "Mom will teach the steps to you", not "Mom will teach the steps for you". "Something bad is going to happen", not "Something's bad is going to happen".
P06 "Does she consider it normal to do it", not "Does she consider this normal to do it".
P07 "This is one of the important parts", not "This is one of the important part".
P09 "I just came with my girlfriend's mom", not "I just came at my girlfriend's mom".