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Translated, edited, and typeset by me [S4LT]
Did my best to clean the shadows on the raw source, but still a bit blurry.
Merry Christmas, Comrades.

You know... That story's actually pretty heart-warming.

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Her complex is complex carbohydrates.

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Taiichi seems like a good dude. Kinda want to see the brother's face when he finds out that Taiichi got with Sanae behind his back.

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This was a blast from the past. Whatever happened to this artist?

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@whobez Katou Hayabusa still exists and posts images from time to time on their twitter.

Sadly no new doujin seem to be forthcoming. Ever.

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some suggestions:
- use single line spacing. the line spacing you're using is too wide.
- do a bit of proofread before uploading so you can catch some avoidable typos. in page 1 alone there's at least 6 typos already.
- a bit of black leveling is probably going to make it look better. not that i know much about it though

all in all. thanks for the hard work!

@2um_3ear
i don't check my DMs, so i'll just put some shamelessly copied links from cutegyaru:

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

can't comment on translation accuracy since i'm unqualified to do so. good luck.

Last edited on 17 December 2021, 17:33.

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@ncc1701z
Thanks for you feedback! I’m still quite inexperienced in doujin translation, any comment on the process will be welcomed!
Check you DM mate.

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