hey! this is my first attempt to translate (well, the first to be published) something from Circle Hitori , sorry if there are some mistakes or typos , my Japanese and my English arent the best so I have done the best I could .

this is the first part just to know your opinion .

Thanks for reading!

psdt: sorry for curshing some text in the boxes
psdt2: sorry for take some liberties in some dialogues, to say the same thing but in a different way, since the direct translation is either not quite good or it is not clear what it means.
psdt3: sorry for the "status" images , i don't have the original without text

Let me guess, before you started this project you didn't thought for even a single second "Hey, maybe you should search for a typesetting guide."

To tell you the hard truth your typesetting is not good. Left aligned text is a big no. Even for sets like this center aligned text is the corret choice.
And you also need comicfonts bot some from the standard fonts of your Windows PC or Mac.

Here are links for guides to improve your typesetting:
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
http://www.ruinevil.com/rawr/editguide/index.html
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1821206/fa32a4e862/

Base +19, annoying_you +8, McMadow +6, Sumwunspecal +6, NineBall09 +6, Danjian +6, dragon11262 +7, StatisticallyNP +10, Wacko -8, catchv +36, Mossberg590 -6, Dazsauce +3, carlos gerardo lopez +6, and 5 more...

Thanks for your help!

Base +6, McMadow +6, RForReversal +7, NineBall09 +6, frozenoctorok +5, Mossberg590 +6, Dazsauce +3, kerorono +6, wind dust +6, xydler +6

Please, don't scare another person, who translates Circle Hitori. I'm tired of holding a phone in my hand and using Google Translate's camera to translate image on my laptop. The story in Circle Hitori's works is just as important for me as images. So, mr. translator, even if you will face harsh cryticism for your typesetting, you will know, that there're desperate people, who will accept your translation in any form. Please, continue.

Base +6, Wacko +8, EisakuOtani -10, Mossberg590 +6, Dazsauce +3, carlos gerardo lopez +6, Wrecklessangel +6, Sumwunspecal +6, kerorono +6, Silamon +5, Clone26 +6, neo_skyline -19, somebody_cares -17, and 2 more...