https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_219288/

Vol 01 : https://e-hentai.org/g/1984270/9d9d63d65f/

跟剛出道的精靈作品比起來 作者真的是越畫越退步 混水摸魚的該覺越來越重了

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The borders look strange.

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The art became much worse...how? Did fuetakishi do QC of his own work?
what a letdown...

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这作者画的越来越不行了

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駝背是真的辣眼睛

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Hell yeah Shoko MILF NTR.But holy shit Fueta rushed the fuck out of the doujin that it still has the page borders.

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退步了，感觉色彩好浅

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I hope people complain about this enough to at least make him fix this unfished work :/

Base +7, yankeeboy27 +6, hawkeye2124 +6, 58569 +6, Sekai seifuku -9

雖然弱智姐妹那個系列劇情真的很弱智，但是真的色。

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越画越拉胯

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确实冬虫夏草8部应该算是巅峰了，这也不能说不好吧，但是珠玉在前实在让人唏嘘

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His old works were a whole lot better, the art is shit and to be honest all he does is Ntr and it just sucks story wise.

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越畫越拉胯

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Arts worse from the first, a fuetakishi classic. And what's up with the chopped off heads and party hat look bits, did he not finish in time but still release this for $$$ regardless? Yikes mate.

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This was absolutely awful.
I think is even worse than his last doujin from the sister series. In fact, I think that work is a masterpiece compared to this.
Let's recap:
- Clearly unfinished work, which is unacceptable because he was posting previews in his Twitter way ahead of time.
- A lot of shots are literally a copy paste from previous works.
- The cuck, aka the Husband, is completely invisible so far in the series, so the NTR is super meh.
- Extremely rushed second half. Pages 42-44 were a joke because after that it was over. Seriously, what the fuck was that last sex scene?
And the worse thing is that this garbage is selling well. I'm sorry, but it shouldn't. This shouldn't have better sales than others works that are clearly better and have artist that they put much more effort. We shouldn't reward this trash.
Hopefully he will re-release this in the near future (I can't wait for this shit to become a trend like games with dlc day one or early access games like Fallout 76 or Cyberpunk) and it also will be a free download to all the owners (lol, yeah, right).
Embarrasing stuff from Fuetakishi.
Oh and btw and most important, Merry Christmas to everyone.
For another year.

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can we all agree its always the same with this author? the little nigga put all his work top the cover lol

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As much as I like Fuetakishi artstyle, this is just greed at it's worse, selling a clearly unfinished work is just an insult to the fans, is that amount of money really worth damaging your image like that?

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我不知道怎么定义越画越拉胯这件事··我也不知道该不该评价剧情有脑没脑
但至少这个本子看起来跟没完成一样让我很难受

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和商店街穴妻1、2集比一比就知道他這集的人體比例和之前的作品比很明顯的不協調，陰影細節上也是。

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Wow the Corynthian really did a number on these people. Very tragic.

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不觉得冬虫夏草是巅峰，剧情太无语，降智太严重，精灵学院那段觉得是最好的，或者学姐那段

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This series just ends here, for "sure" it will have another story with other characters.

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???? p2p에는 있는데 정작 익헨에는 없네요? 이유가?

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@mangakam Apareantly this got fixed, any chance of re-uploading the fixed finished work ?

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