Not sure why this is tagged as a rewrite. The few pages I've compared to the RAWs look fine.

Side note: please name your galleries properly. It's tiring always renaming them.

[ERECT TOUCH (Erect Sawaru)] BUNNY SLAVE ～Goshujin-sama no Seiyoku Shori Shichaimasu～ [English] [Digital]
Add [英訳] at the end of JP title, but before [DL版].

More comments:

1. Punctuate. You HAVE to punctuate in English, even for comics and manga. I know JP never punctuate minus the odd ellipses or question mark. This doesn't apply to English. Put periods at the end of your sentences, and commas where they need to be.

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Damn this was fast, only problem there is no 4some with the bunners

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Akane's part genuinely made me chuckle, now that's a true Sigma Male move right there.

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while im thankful for the translation, i could explode over and over with page 32
holy shit thats peak student form

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No Neru? meh

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I mean it's hot but... Why did he slap her?

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Advice for future projects:
When you work with images like this, always save your black and white images as grayscale pngs instead of grayscale jpgs. The filesize will go down signifcantly.
Example page 5: yours is 10.7 MB and pretty much the same as the RAW. Converted to png its size went down to 2.62 MB.

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@Overlol
https://e-hentai.org/g/1664352/4b0227ba37/ being autistic in doujinshi https://e-hentai.org/g/1270195/b0bebe478f/#cnew

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