Thank you for the translation

Base +15, Resike +6, bloopypoo -7, shiranai93 -6, dankestdungeon -22, Alteisen Riese -9

The succubus in this is by far the hottest character I've seen all year. She's a total bombshell and seems like she'd be quite the sweetheart once you get to know her. I hope this blows up one day because this is superb. My only gripe is not-Rem and not-Ram didn't join in the fun. Seeing them suck a couple guys off would've been fun.

Base +4, minnazzo +12

Rough grammar
p2 spleeping -> sleeping
candit -> candid
yourself -> yourselves
p3 us her -> us here
feed of -> feed off of
p4 I gathered here -> I've gathered people
p5 from which one should I start? -> Who should I start with?
p6 energetc -> energetic
p8 I don't stand -> I can't stand
p12 heart content -> heart's content
p13 reasume -> resume
will welcoming -> will welcome

Base +42, minnazzo +12