this font is making me angry

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This is resized from 2470x3510 to 844x1200 for some reason.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/967870/be8889b7f5/

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So many stripes, I thought I was looking at a Zebra enclosure.

Base +14, Mandraken +6, nisor04 +11, DLiu +6, Hard human 69 +6, MikinTodo -6

Ok, you've been shitting out these "translations" almost twice a day now. Can you fucking stop until you actually know what you're doing? Holy shit.

1. This reads like it was MTLd.
2. STOP USING THE DOWNSIZED VERSIONS. Download the original archives (see right side of your screen, you dingus.)
3. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNGs, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
4. Please level your pages.
5. Please redraw
6. Your typesetting is atrocious. See guide below.
7. Punctuate. You HAVE to punctuate in English, even for comics and manga. I know JP never punctuate minus the odd ellipses or question mark. This doesn't apply to English. Put periods at the end of your sentences, and commas where they need to be.
8. Fonts. They're shit. Find better ones. Examples: CCVictorySpeech, Wild Words, Spinner Rack BB.

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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Kiriyama-sensei is dead, please have respect toward his work.

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Some people love to whine about how this tag needs 10 examples even though in some cases (including this one), it is crystal clear the quality is shit when you look at any random page. But here we go.

Pg 24
"forgot 'to' check out". If you want to go for the noun, it's "checkout" without the space, but the sentence will sound unnatural.

Pg 23
"There were so many this time" and "I really had fun" are two separate clauses. "I had a lot of fun" would be the better option instead of "I really had fun". Also, this text bubble doesn't make sense. Many what? And so I checked the raw and it was nothing surprising that the original meaning is completely different. This is MTL for sure.
"Was my pussy it that good?" Nice one heh

Pg 22
"It was useless there are still pounds of semen in here holes." What?

Pg 21
"your're". You know how some people argue about "your" vs. "you're". This asshat went 1 step further and invented the real solution.
"covered with". "in" would be the better preposition to be used. Though I'm not too strict on this one.
"I'm empty I can't get rid of your body". What? Is this a murder scene? Why would someone need to dispose of a body?
"Isn't 'it' time to stop?"
"How many times did you shot?"

Pg 20
"thick 'seeds'"
"breastmilk" or "breast milk". No "breast's milk". Technically it's not ungrammatical, but no one talks like this.
"I 'feel' like"

After typing all these out, I'm quite confident this is not a shit MTL, this is a shit machine assisted rewrite. Actually I doubt this cockhead even used MTL, since some panels are so far off, no translation services could ever produce lines this wrong.

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anyone have chapter 1 and 2?

Base +6

Must be a hard life being female....

it's just not fair.

Base +7, lewdhev -6, MikinTodo -6

@Ruckkus: 2nd time i see you making misogyny comment. that’s just how you think of woman

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