An updated version with some corrections based on comments.

Sakura drawn by Sahara Wataru is the best Sakura ever 😍

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There's ALOT of in this translation that could've been EASILY redrawn/clean and other stuff that shouldn't have gotten translated. Some of the SFX translation just look weird. Like, most of the editing is good work but some is just partially laziness that either shouldn't have been touched and should've been cleaned.

I'm not saying that this is bad work, I'm just saying that it could've been better.

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Sound effects should never include "noises", "sound of" or "SFX." They should just be a single italicized verb, like "creak" or "slap."
For example, "Pelvis slapping butt sounds"-> "slap"

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Damn, he actually drew someone else. Either way nice to see more turbo thot Sakura.

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>SFX of me facepalming
I also love how you're offering commissions, but can't even spell the word right lol.

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Combining two unrelated stories into one individual doujin (not the same thing as a tank or comp) is unnecessary; either draw one or the other. But he's drawn so much Naruto that at this point, I couldn't care less about him drawing anything else; no one's reading Sunahara Wataru for Dragon Quest. That being said, even the Naruto half of this doujin was boring; I like thotpocket Sakura as much anyone else does, but this premise is completely unoriginal. Shippuden has been over for so long now; can he just get back to drawing Boruto-era doujins? Maybe he can draw Boruto fucking Sakura, or if no one likes Boruto himself, just draw more of Naruto and Sakura fucking as full-grown adults. But at least just once, please don't put Sarada in it (then again, though, he's done five Boruto era doujins so far, and all of them had some form of loli, even the one that didn't have Sarada in it at all; Hinata literally transformed into a kid for the last page. One of the tanks also had a bonus story set during Boruto that had Naruto fucking Sarada and kid versions of Sakura, Ino and Hinata, too; they transformed into kids. I guess Boruto era = there must be loli no matter what, as far as Wataru is concerned. In that case, screw it, I can do without Boruto doujins lol).

Honestly, I just don't want to feel like I'm still in 2007 when I read these doujins; he can at least pick a more interesting period than the start of Shippuden. I still want another doujin set during the Blank Period; he's only drawn one of those: https://e-hentai.org/g/984411/8eef4aa48c/

I'm sure a Naruto x Hinata doujin set during that period would sell; Hinata is popular, and he's drawn a Boruto-era doujin of Naruto fucking only her before: https://e-hentai.org/g/984406/82e6069e2b/

I'd love a simple doujin of Naruto fucking Hinata when they were still dating; he's done illustrations based on that before:
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/47528591
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/47479490

Or if that's too vanilla, throw in Sakura for another threesome. I'd be fine with just Sakura, too. But please draw something other than the start of Shippuden.

Last edited on 10 January 2022, 14:13.

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I always love new stuff from Sahara Wataru. Definitely one of my top favorite artists when it comes to Naruto hentai. Really perfected them ahegao-ing to Naruto's huge cock.

My only critique from this doujiin is that it appears to not have been a crossover like I'd hoped back when I first saw the sample images. I'd have loved to see Maam be a guest star to Naruto and Sakura's mind-breaking fun. However, this doesn't even seem to be a 'cosplay' scenario like what Naruho did with his Taimanin Hinata doujin.

Doing what sells and what people like is fine, as Sahara Wataru is great in what he does. I just sometimes wish for a little change-up to the standard formula, be it someone other than Sakura delivering those juicy ahegao's or a different scenario/theme that is played with like 'training', a hot spring vacation, even 'sex education' for either Naruto or his lovers to master new techniques.

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It's a given that he'll draw Sakura in almost anything. It's not like he hasn't drawn anyone else before; he's given Hinata, Tsunade, Ino, Shizune a fair bit of attention over the years, and even Tenten made a small appearance once. I don't mind if he just wants to draw Sakura, but he should still come up with more original premises.

A hot spring doujin sounds great; I'd love to see this fleshed out into its own work: http://karakishi1203.blog.fc2.com/img/2014121922090864a.jpg/

I'm also not sure if this would sell, but a doujin of Naruto having a threesome with Sakura and Karui of all people would be a nice change of pace. Karui always reminded me of a black counterpart to Sakura, so Naruto fucking both of them would be nice.

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This translation is garbage.

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Please don't translate sound like that

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I'll agree that this is very standard for storyline and that him mixing it up with more girls, or threesomes would be nice. But I definitely don't want Boruto getting involved in a scenario that's always been Naruto banging the girls.

And he clearly just really likes Sakura, if he wants to draw Sakura, that's fine.

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Spandex shorts will never get old and the kinky works of Wataru involving said shorts will always have a strong degree of eroticism. Seeing Naruto as a kid with Sakura and other Kunoichi clad in them really gave me that special appetite.

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I'll be waiting for another translation. Who the hell writes out sound effects like that? Nevermind the other awkward phrasing like: "Actually she is the one being a moron." or "She is quite different from her Bell Snatch Test self." I had to reread that second sentence three times before I got it.

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The Bell snatch test refers to the bell test they took at the start of the series as Team 7. It's not grammatically incorrect; you just have to know the story to understand it.

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Guys, you are thinking this too much... He just has a weakness for pink haired tomboyish girls, that's all.

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