Re-edited using Tankoubon Raw

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/336c6ddac6/2050947-139

Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/1900482/68ab2161e3/

Please let me know if you spot any errors or omissions.

Based, too much translation left untouched even after tank come out.

Thanks!

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Well done mate! Tank update edits are increasingly rare and always appreciated.

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1. Please export black and white images as grayscale PNGs, not RGB JPGs. This is to a) avoid artifacting; b) preserve quality; c) de-bloat.
2. Please level your pages. This one isn't too bad, but still. I've done an example for you: https://ibb.co/nQDD12m

More resources:

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20190406011154/https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glfdOwM3TFE

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Page 27: "The top rankings are filled with other-son incest stories." I believe the m is missing

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Part 1 is here https://e-hentai.org/g/1896460/9b24a6d4c4/

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@Kaizoku_Alex, Thanks, fixed it!

Last edited on 15 January 2022, 08:24.

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I'm looking forward to your raw manuscript.... and your raw incest sex.

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So the son also becomes a mangaka at the end?

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Page 8: why does his dick have a nipple, dafuq. lost my shit there

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@F_JUNK_DUMP: https://e-hentai.org/g/2122500/5469b2f4e1/

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