The two existing chapters of Villains of the Snow Sea so far. Even though they're for sale I'm just happy if people read them at all, and so far the biggest audience these comics get is on ehentai. Also I do know the pages are pretty small but this is the free version, and I'm planning to redo a lot of the text for the big three chapter collection so it's more readable.

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While the art is quite good, this art style demands colorization or at least shading. There's too much going on and not quite enough variation in line weight so things get muddy at certain points.
(Consequently the second issue is much clearer)

Last edited on 03 February 2022, 22:46.

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Yeah I definitely agree on the coloring, if chapter 3 gets done this year then the first thing I want to do is get the first chapter colored in, along with a bunch of other tweaks. Thanks for the feedback!

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I like the art but it seems a bit rushed. It was super slow-paced with comic showing how he was taking care of her step by step but 3 pages after she can talk to him they are already fucking. Maybe it is in character but it was a bit jarring for me.

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looks interesting i like the concept

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This is pretty cool. I love Laily's design. I love Amazon women, and she brings a nice Barbarian girl flavor. Her beast spirit powers are pretty cool.

Also, that alchemy stuff looks pretty neat. Maybe you could include an extras page explaining things, like why the healing juice pattern needs disconnects(?) to work, or what was the purpose of those crafted bullets when Thomas already had a gun. Putting that kind of info on an Extras page can keep a story from being bogged down with technical talk, especially when characters are unlikely to need a detailed explanation( this is presumptuous, but Laily doesn't seem the intellectual type).

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See that, lads. Go out there and secure big tiddy, muscle waifu in the snow.

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