cleaning: I see you often just omit to remove and redraw text if it goes outside bubbles or clips the bubbles (i.e moans/screams/handwritten text). Looks really poor. Guide on redrawing here: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials
every page: please punctuate/lots of untranslated text (including handwritten dialogue) p.6 on your designated private rooms => in your p.7 scalated => escalated p.7 u want to make => I want to p.8 untranslated text p.9 untranslated text p.10 I've been waiting in the line => in line p.11 these are 3 days of saved semen => this is p.14 empty text bubble p.15 does Maru pussy => Maru's p.15 feels good => feel good p.15 rubing => rubbing p.16 please do your best on your next song => in or for p.16 so I'll do my best at my part time => at my part-time job p.16 embarassing => embarrassing p.16 untranslated text p.17 squeze
Base +15, Enderleaf +6, RHTMK +6, Ass Spanker +25, Glovelove. +21